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Dawning View


Experimental writer, world builder and artist. I do sketches of many of my worldly creations.

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After one thousand years of heartbreak and grievance, Twilight Sparkle visits the grave of her friends, telling them all her thoughts and emotions. Some say that time heals, but it's obvious that some accusations are not always right.

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This is meant to be a monologue of sorts. It does not contain any movement of the character, any out of speech thoughts, or any visualizations that are being viewed at the current time. It is all dialogue, and is meant to be that way. I wanted to put forth a feeling that this was something she had been meaning to do for a long time, but just could not gather the strength to do so in the past. I have a feeling that I am just rambling now, but don't expect anything great. If you like it, then yay. If not, then yay. I am not going to get angry at comments that are possitive criticism, constructive, or negative.

Inspired by Cherax Destructor's Fading Light. It's a pretty song, as is the entire album.

Update: I am not very proud of this, but it's all up to you. I look back at it and I think "Why did I write this?". Reason being is that I feel as if I was trying way too hard to actually make something, rather than writing when it felt right. The flow is eh, the details are eh, everything is eh. If you like it, then that's cool! But I have different opinions on it.

Update 2 (The many years later update): It has a reading by Scribber!

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It's so emotive! It made me cry.:raritystarry::raritycry::pinkiesad2:

makes me glad it's neither confirmed nor denied whether the rest of the mane 6 are immortal or not.

the only clue we have to their final fate in the show is one phrase, that the creators remain faithful to and contiue to go by: "Twilight will NOT outlive her friends".

either they are all immortal, or she will die first, because to have even ONE of her friends die before would mean she OUTLIVED them.

Omg! I love the scribbler reading! 😭

This was honestly so emotional, so heartbreaking, but not without its own light of hope at the end of the tunnel. That these legacies, stories and lives will carry on through Twilight's memories.

Now, if you excuse me, I'm going to go crawl into a corner and cry.

I wont cry...
I wont cry...
I wont cry...

I lie, i cry T-T this is such beautiful writen..

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Holy oh shit dude this is surreal. I haven't been on here in ages and I come back to seeing that people liked this! Was this featured or something? This laid dormant for so long then all of a sudden around my birthday last year it got a bunch of comments.

So this was written in response to a song I listened to and that song was inspired by another fiction! Additionally a lot of this was written in high school on my slide phone while I was outside by our track during a communications technology class. It's unreal to come back to it 6 years later and see this love and connection for it. Thank you all so much!

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It's because I did a reading of it and PresentPerfect featured it on his fanfic review blog.

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Took some hunting but I found the review. Funny they are spectacle of when I wrote it, but whatevs. Thanks for the reading, though!

This is a seriously underrated story. It was genuinely beautiful - a poetic piece about the nature of life and death. Thank you for writing this.~

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