• Member Since 22nd Jun, 2012
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Dawning View


Experimental writer, world builder and artist. I do sketches of many of my worldly creations.

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After one thousand years of heartbreak and grievance, Twilight Sparkle visits the grave of her friends, telling them all her thoughts and emotions. Some say that time heals, but it's obvious that some accusations are not always right.

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This is meant to be a monologue of sorts. It does not contain any movement of the character, any out of speech thoughts, or any visualizations that are being viewed at the current time. It is all dialogue, and is meant to be that way. I wanted to put forth a feeling that this was something she had been meaning to do for a long time, but just could not gather the strength to do so in the past. I have a feeling that I am just rambling now, but don't expect anything great. If you like it, then yay. If not, then yay. I am not going to get angry at comments that are possitive criticism, constructive, or negative.

Inspired by Cherax Destructor's Fading Light. It's a pretty song, as is the entire album.

Update: I am not very proud of this, but it's all up to you. I look back at it and I think "Why did I write this?". Reason being is that I feel as if I was trying way too hard to actually make something, rather than writing when it felt right. The flow is eh, the details are eh, everything is eh. If you like it, then that's cool! But I have different opinions on it.

Update 2 (The many years later update): It has a reading by Scribber!

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