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ShootingStar213


Hello everyone, as a artist, I love to create new things, stories are no exception. So I shall post a series I thought of known as My Little Pony Civil war. Enjoy.

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Nightmare Moon has returned, a civil war has sparked all across Equestria forcing everyone to choose between the order that is the sun or the new chaos that is the moon. In the center of it is a boy that only wishes to fix that problem. But how can he fix a problem, if he's apart of that problem?

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Comments ( 4 )

Good work.
it need some cleaning in the text and some character description, but other then that is a good fic.
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5767484 Character description? How so? I thought I said something about the characters in the series so far T.T

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ok, I may have been little unclear on the description part.
what I should have said that it needs a little more character description than it is now.
You know little about what cloth they are wearing or there body form like muscular, slim or chucky.
just a little more character description not to much, just little more.

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