Twilight Sparkle returns once again to the alternate world to save it from an approaching darkness. United with her old friends again, including her husband Courageous Heart, Twilight learns that Canterlot High is in danger of being removed from the map...thanks to the efforts of a ruthless billionaire by the name of Tirek.
With the big soccer game against the Diamond Dogs approaching, Twilight and all her friends will have to work together in order to show everybody what the Spirit of Friendship really means...and save Canterlot High.
Note :This is a sequel to my other stories
Chapters (2)
Nice!
This seems like a great story. Unfortunately I feel like I was pulled into it part way through. I want to know, who is courageous. How did he and Twilight met, how long were they dating. What was Shinnings reaction to him. I love your writing style. I just think that these questions need to be answered to really develop the Original Character gaps.
4482237 It's a sequel to my other stories, which are at my DeviantArt account (http://courageous-of-light.deviantart.com/gallery/)
4482276 Thank you. I will be reading those now. By the way you may want to put that on the introduction of your story. It may help other readers who are wondering the same thing.
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They can find my DeviantArt themselves or look at the comments.
What the heil is this?
You have earned the BBCode Of Failure™
4482416
I'm trying my best to write the stories I want to write, please don't be mean to me. There's no reason to be a hater. It's not my responsibility to write what you want to read, so these downvotes aren't acceptable. You need to leave me alone.
4482276 it says it doesn't exist
4482428 What? With a response like that, I bet you don't you even lift!
4482439 It does exist
4482439
You're lying.
4482416
What the heck?
4482510 Hmm? Do you want me to post something worse?
4482510
Stop posting on my story, I asked you.
4482520
NO.
4482520 Do it.
4482276 I agree with what others said. You should either put those up too, with proper sequel tagging, or edit the long description so that your stories appear there. Otherwise, most readers are going to think what I did. "Who the heck is Courageous Heart? How did Twilight marry him? And if they're married, why are they still in high school?" Most readers will not just pop over to DeviantArt and go hunting around in your gallery. It's too much work, and the interface for fanfic is terrible. So I'd strongly recommend the extra effort of placing your DeviantArt stories here. You'll avoid that "who is he?" reaction.
4482461 yes, I'm LYING
that makes fucking sense
I'm lying
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SO SORRY I LIED
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4482602
that's horrible
4482601
You photoshopped that.
4482617 I'm going to add "paranoid delusions" to the list of mental issues you have.
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I was going to review this. Then, after I started reading to build the review, I recognized not positive, not negative, but exactly the same story structure and the like which came up in my previous review.
I don't feel like reviewing this now. It would be redundant.
4482632
such broke
4482633
Get out of my STORY YOU HATER
4482638 Lel yep
4482654 Hey there, friend. You look like you might need to calm down a bit. Stare at this until the feeling of anger leaves your tormented soul:
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4482669
I'm sorry, you're right.
4482669
That is jusft the cutest changeling.
4482632
Exactly, also penis
4482633
exactly, also vagina
4482654
Auschwitz dick twaddler
Would you like to hear some stories about the Nazi death camps?
4482703
Do I need to report you?
4482709
And what exactly would you report me for?
4482716
I asked you to leave me alone.
4482716 I'm sorry, that wasn't a very nice thing of me to say
4482633
Why did you ban me from your blog? I was just derfending myself. Also what do you mean I'm not me.
4482719
You, a user to whom I have never spoken, messaged me out of nowhere calling me a hater and telling me not to comment on--you know what if you report me I'll just show Obs the PM you sent and we'll all be happy except you k
If troll, lulz 5 all
If not troll, lulz 5 erry1 but u
4482731
Go ahead, he'll just see you're the wrong one.
4482731
You're just thr ringleader in a circus of btrolls
4482740
lol ok
4482633
Please respond.
4482744 lol
4482742
Reference my nipples like a librarian.
4482768
What was the reference?
4482774
You have to use the dewey decimal system to find it
4482783
I don't know what that is. Stop trolling.
4482633
IT'S YOUR FAULT MY STORY IS FAILING. YOU AND YOUR STUOPID "REVIEW".
4482534
I think that you should stop hating
4482901 I DON'T. I'm giving you good advice which might stop the flood of downrates you're getting, and which, by the way, I didn't give you. If you are determined to ignore advice, so be it.
Yay, comment fights! It's just like youtube!
4482947
STOP.FREAKING.HATING.ON.MY.STORY.
4482926
No I'm determined to GET A FUCKIN FAIR CRITIQUE GOD DAMN IT!
4482956 I'm not 'hating' your story, just calm down dude, you're not earning any positive popularity by doing this shit