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One True Thrond


Sometimes reads pony stories.

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Rarity always hoped to get her more tomboyish friends, Rainbow Dash and Applejack, into dresses, but she knows they don't like that sort of thing. However, when she comes up with a plan to achieve that hope, it results in her new models learning new things about themselves and each other.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

This is a very nice fic, a little bit off details, but it's still likable. the part about Applejack realizing could be not that short. while Dash was too fast. If you could read spanish I made a longer review. Sorry if I confuse you!

Comment posted by One True Thrond deleted May 15th, 2014

4393351 I understand. I was wondering if I'd made it too quick, actually. Glad you'd liked it, though. Thanks for commenting!

This was very nice! You're excellent at visual description, and your "voice" for the main characters is spot on; they sound like they're supposed to. This is something that gets missed a LOT.

Good work! I hope to see more! :)

5902875 Thanks! I hope to make more! Now if only I could sustain an idea.

Pretty good so far.

Short but sweet, great work!

You know I have to admit that for a thing like this it was fairly good. It didn't make me want to quit halfway through like most AppleDash fics.

Good job.

It's on like Diddy and Dixie Kong.

Rarity's plan is set into motion.

I expected better.

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