i enjoy righting fan fictions but never had anywhere to show my work
after a meteor crash lands near fluttershy's cottage angle bunny meets a strange talking magical carrot who tells him of a land of infinite carrots but before angle can get to this land he must first complete a series of trials and quests to find eight pieces of an amulet.
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I do believe you mean Angel.
I was disappointed that this story wasn't based around some trigonometry puns, but I giggled pretty hard at this.
4576289 yeeeeeaaaaaahhhhh i happened to be a failure at spelling
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Trust me, I've read worse.
4577729 thank you i suppose i mean i did actually put more thought and effort into this than my first fan fic and actually spent several days trying to get the story how i wanted it but even as i was editing it i knew it wasn't totally perfect so understanding that this is neither my best work nor my worst really helps my self esteem and i really appreciate your opinion and comments
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Oh, you're welcome!
Remember, take as much time as you need to write. Try to make your chapters 2,000 words long. Describing the surroundings, things, what the character is thinking, etc, is the best way to do this. I write chapters full of description, even though my characters do usually next to nothing in that chapter. Literally, one chapter of one of my fanfictions was Twilight walking through a cave and thinking.
I'm always up for being a proof reader, so message me if you are interested in having one!
4580877 OMG I WOULD LOVE FOR YOU TO PROOF READ MY STORIES I actually have one im working on and i need it proof read could i get your email?
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Sure, I'll message it to you, and we can work on it over google docs!
no likes...?
WHYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
4581777 The title is "angle and demons". Not capitalized. Angle instead of angel. Your description has no capital letters or punctuation and is one long run-on sentence. You keep writing Angle in the description when I'm pretty sure it's Angel. It's not hard to tell why there are no likes.
The story. Better than the description, but I still see a lot of grammar mistakes. Bad formatting as well. It's really amateurish writing. Little to no descriptions. Over reliance on dialogue. You really need a lot of work.
4583295 thanks i have only started writing recently and appreciate the criticism