Hello, my name is Blaze Rocket, I am just a friend of mane 6 and I wanted to tell them how I really got my cutie mark, how my parents died, and basically my life story
Mane 6 and Spike gathered around and were ready to hear my story. "Well we are ready to hear your story" Twilight said."
And so I started, "Well...it all started on a great day in Equestria..." I said letting it all pour out.
Note: This is my first fic so go easy on me ok. Plus...let's just say its a sequel to Deadcat's pinkie promise.#PINKIEPRIOMISEISBESTSTORY
Chapters (4)
not bad..... needs to be edited though.
i'll be keeping an eye on this fic.
4352243 ok thnx
Awesome job!! this was really good
4358748 thnx a lot!!!
4358748 well it's kind of like your story just saying but it's different characters sry if that's bad but just take it as a sequel ok
U inspired me to write this basically
4358748 but u did give me a lot of ideas to
4358748 well chapter 2 is done its a lot shorter tho
4358748 sry if that's bad
4375499
i dont think its bad at all!
4383704 well..ok
Stand some constructive criticism? First let me say you have a wonderful premise for a story. However, you could stand to build it up a bit. More details and characterization. For example, you gave a very basic idea of who Blaze is, but didn't really give him any depth. There's no reason for us (the audience) to connect with him.
); you could stand to go a bit more into the dynamic he has between himself and the rest of his family (especially his brother Dark Night.)
While you don't have to go into the fact that while he hates turnip greens, but he loves spinach (although that is a nice personal touch if I say so myself
Also, take your time. Unless there's a contest going on (and there wasn't the last time I checked) there's no reason for this to have the rushed feeling this is giving off. Hope I helped.
4749516 first of all you helped a lot
second this is my first story so I'm not the best at writing third I tried to not rush it forth my writing will be better in other chapters fifth Ill try to give blaze a better background 
thnx
4758040 Glad to hear it. Also thanks for the favorite on my story.
4759164 no problem
and the next chapter will be coming out and I'm trying to make it longer and better
Whoops I meant colts not fillies
4383704 I know it's terrible I'm just not as good as you or a lot of people
