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Coolmrfreeze


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(Gore is not yet a guarantee, but it might go there at some point. It is a war fic, after all.)
Equestria is known as a fair nation with good intentions. But, as with all great nations, there are those who seek to destroy it. Equestria has allies, and an equal number of enemies-when these enemies band together, they become a force not to be reckoned with. Nothing will stand in their way, except for a lone settlement with a specific position.
Queen Chrysalis had her eye on this settlement. With grave intentions, she, King Sombra, and a Mercenary Lord, gather at the borders of Equestria with a great army. Perhaps she will call a siege upon Canterlot, Perhaps. May the Goddesses help the City in The Sky.
Thanks to Panzer for the stunning image that he crafted. Giant thanks to MIKEANTHONY321 for being an amazing proofreader.

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Lyi

Looking at your title description, I see a few grammatical errors.

Lyi

IN my opinion, this would better suit the description:

(Gore is not yet a guarantee, but it might go there at some point. It is a war fic, after all.)
Equestria is known as a fair nation with good intentions. But, as with all great nations, there are those who seek to destroy it. Equestria has allies, and an equal number of enemies-when these enemies band together, they become a force not to be reckoned with. Nothing will stand in their way, except for a settlement with a specific position.
Queen Chrysalis had her eye on this settlement. With grave intentions, she, King Sombra, and a mercenary, gathered an army. Perhaps she will call l a siege upon Canterlot. Perhaps. May the Goddesses help the City in The Sky.
Thanks to Panzer for the stunning image that he crafted. Giant thanks to MIKEANTHONY321 for being an amazing proofreader.

This is solely my opinion, and should not be taken over yours.

6372872 thank you :3 I really appriciate and like the desc it is what I wanted it to be thanks a lot :3

Lyi

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Oh! I see you now use my suggestion :) Thanks for taking me seriously.

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