Christian and Geo in Equestria

by ChrisTheCat

Final Message

Hey, everypony. I have some bad news.

As much as I hate myself for this, Christian and Geo in Equestria will officially be cancelled as of 3:00 pm AUS standard time today. So, now, really.

I want to keep going, but...I don't feel the same spark that I did when I first began. Imagine if I kept going now. Christian would be half the character he used to be, Geo would be completely innacurate, the ponies would become completely predictable, and the entire story would turn stale very quickly, and that is the last thing I want to see. Everything would just be hollow.

It's better that it dies like this, quickly and mercifully, rather than being dragged along painfully.

Though, I would like to thank everyone who favourited this fic along the way, even as it came to an end.

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A special thanks to a few certain people:

Shadow Scryer, for analyzing everything Christian did, and then proceeding to comment on his intense, borderline sociopathic douchebaggery. Your comments were quite entertaining, and for that I thank you.

Jiropracter, for defending me (unnecessarily, but still) after Medicshy_ reviewed this fic. It was great to see people so dedicated that they would actually argue to defend this fic, and myself in the process. Thank you very much.

machezan, for the 'staches.

Wockstar, for his...amusing comments about the TF2 Spy class. Funny, I'm more of a Pyro, so we should be mortal enemies. Funny, that.

DavidPony, for being the first person to figure out the hidden message I left behind in a certain chapter, and for saying that this is the best HiE fic on this site. I sincerely disagree, but the sentiments are much appreciated.

Frost, for arguing with Christian using faux-logic. It was quite entertaining.

Azzazel, for being awesomely evil, and understanding the references I made throughout the fic.

Bacon[Hazard], for apparently vomiting everywhere after Christian's past was revealed.

Scorcher, for apparently crying after Christian's past was revealed.

AnonymousCoward, for summing up how I feel about my generation as a whole.

Medicshy, for reviewing this fic, and then inspiring me to join him in reviewing pony fiction. You, sir, are a good friend.

Zephyr, for the Boromir picture that caused tremendous amounts of laughter.

Thorgar595, for being the only reader I've met IRL, who supported me long before I began writing.

demonoid47, for the amusing Inception reference.

TheArchive, for his in-depth comments that basically summed up as giant middle fingers to Christian.

Saxon, for having the highest amount of comments across the duration of the fic, and many amusing points of view.

stalins organ, for placing those very informative quotesin response to Geo's dislike of her own species.

Well, that's everypony.

And now, I bid you adeu, with three things to note.

1. This is the link to the site in which I do my reviews. They usually appear weekly. I'm not the only one, though. Medicshy, AxeOfChaos and DarcySupremest also review here as well. Take a gander, and follow us. Imagine my reviews as if it's not me doing the reviewing, but rather Christian himself. I keep him alive that way.

http://www.supremestfanfictionreviews.blogspot.com.au/

2. I have another fic, 'Brains!'. It's good, and has very little views. You wouldn't mind fixing that, would you? For Christian and Geo?

3. I asked Geo, one of my best friends in real life, to go out with me. She said yes. My first date. Funny how that works. When God closes a door...

Well, this is the end, I suppose. I hope you enjoyed what became of Christian and Geo in Equestria.

Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat

Comments

[Kingcam]

It was a nice story.
Shame to see it go.

[Meliron]

Welp, guess that's that. Sorry to hear you lost your inspiration man, and I wish you luck in future endeavors.

[ChrisTheCat]

869990
I feel awful about it, but there isn't much I can do.

[ChrisTheCat]

869994
Thank you, sincerely.

[ChrisTheCat]

870004
Thank you, kind sir and/or madam.

[ChrisTheCat]

870049
Here's the ending I wanted:

Fluttershy is straight, Dash's feelings are unrequitted.

Christian remains a douchebag, and when he finally returns to the human world, he remains as such. He is given a small amulet to return to Equestria whenever he chooses, at the exact moment he left. He only uses it after about 40 years, and hasn't changed that much, though the difference being is that he's willing to learn.

Geo remains in Equestria, because why not?

[beepboop]

Saddened to say the least heartbroken to say the most. I liked Christians cruel
joking with the ponies. It was fun while it lasted, here's to you!

[kararnos]

dude you know you may be hit by the spark in the future so don't close and lock the door let it stay open....

[ChrisTheCat]

870103
Thank you. I hope you enjoy my reviews, and Brains! if you bother to read them.

[LyonAzakura]

I really liked this fic, the way Chris was, well, it remind how I was a couple of years ago.
That, and the fight with Rainbow Dash, the bet with Applejack, the awkwardness, I liked a lot of things now that i think about it... Too bad it has come to an end
I wish you nothing but Good Luck and Health in your life my friend, thanks a lot for your story

[ChrisTheCat]

870189
Well, if I do get the spark back, I'll make a big announcement. It seems unlikely, but hey, nothing's impossible.

[KillerofStars]

Tis was an awesome Fic when i first started reading it up until the last made chapter.
I am always sadden to see someone lose the spark for a story, even if its bad in my eyes, but i shall read this Brains fic and see if i like it.
Anyways have a nice day.

[ChrisTheCat]

870198
I'm glad to hear this fic had such an effect on people. Thank you for your kind words.

[ChrisTheCat]

870201
Thank you. It was my goal to have other people enjoy this, but there's no point if I don't enjoy it.

[Shadow Scryer]

Hmm. A shame to see it die, I enjoyed calling the character out for being an arrogant, egocentric, psychotic cunt as much as you seemed to enjoy reading said comments. But your story, your call. Plus, if ya leave it as is we can come up with our own endings. Personally, I like the idea of Chris, being the actual sadist he is, would try murdering someone after carefully coming up with an exact time, place, pony and seemingly flawless case, pinning the blame on someone else (Possibly Dashie or Pinkie, seems to hate both of them immensely and loves watching them suffer) and creating turmoil just to be a colossal dick. However, his lack of ability to think outside the box gets him found out by a random passing pegasus, arrested and executed. And since I'm completely insane, let's throw in a few years of torture, inclusive of lemon juice, eyes... or lack thereof, cutting out his tongue when the screams get too annoying, etc. A few other things not involving the misnomer man, but I've gone on to long. It was fun mate, have a good one.

...The pyro VS spy statement implies you have steam.

[ChrisTheCat]

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I do. ChrisTheCat1.

[3748996328]

It feels as if a part of me has died in the form of a well written and crafted piece of writing, but as a fellow writer i know how painful it is to write somthing that isnt your best.

I thank you for brightening my life with every chapter. Good on ya!

[ChrisTheCat]

871178
Thanks mate. You too.
I still have my review series and Brains! if you want more. I'm not one for shameless self promotion, but there it is.

[DavidPony]

all good things must come to an end i guess....

on the other hand.....i got an honerable mention! yey!

[ChrisTheCat]

871281
Truer words have never been spoken in the past hour.

[Jorofrarie]

Sad to see it go, especially due to Christian's... unusual nature...

Also, it was one of the fics with a good grammar history, soooo...

R.I.P

-Jorofrarie

[ChrisTheCat]

871403
I am too, but there isn't much I can do if the spark just isn't there.

As my review series will tell you, I am a Grammar Nazi. I take great pride in it, and it's fun to go through other fics and CORRECT ZEM.

[SgtCarrotop]

aww sad, my friend willy will also be sad ur fic was the first fic he ever read ( after i forced him to watch the entire 2 seasons at my house in one go making him a brony) and is still currently one of his favorites as it is mine. But i can understand this; really i would be lying if i said i didnt see it coming i have an unfortunate nack for being overly philosophical and insightful.
ethier way being one of the first fanfics i ever read Christian and Geo in Equestria will always have a special place in my heart.

p.s. christian is best pony
p.s.s. geo is clearly a slut...i just had to say this.
p.s.s.s. i like pie

[SgtCarrotop]

871577....oh god...if i EVER get around to making any of like my 10 fanfics ill be hearing a lot form you. im about as grammatically articulate as a narwhal...
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i blame the american education system...

[Willis]

*Sees message* NUUUUUUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Well I don't know about you, but I think this fic was going great! Now I guess we'll never know what Christian does to AJ and all the other Ponies.
You still might be able to wrap this up nicely in a few more chapters if you wanted to but I'm not going to make you change your decision. This fic was probably one of the first fics I read on this site and it left a good impression on me (especially for HiE fics). Well, it was good while it lasted.

So long and farewell! Perhaps you'll have other great fics in the future that I'll read.
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Oh yeah, congrats on the relationship.

EDIT: Oh look I'm right under Sgt's comment. XD

[Mister Cider]

Well, I prefer knowing it's cancelled then forever incomplete. I'll miss Christian and his forever scheming ways, Geo not so much.

[SatOnACat]

No.....no....noooooooooo. Why? *sign* I guess all great things must come to an end......but so soon. This was my second fav fic Ive read! Not of my little pony but EVERYTHING! Not even pammazola's Inuyasha fics could measure up to this. I literally feel like I have a hole in my heart.

R.I.P Christian and Geo in Equestria

You will be missed

[yutz]

Dammit, it was getting good too.

....ah well it was fun as it lasted.

[Gizmo Hibiki]

This...is the......end.....?
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[ShiroExia]

well it was a good story, and i can agree this would make it alot better then expanding it. have a nice day good fellow, you have a lady friend you must see to. ;D

[Juggernaut]

This is rather sad...

[stalins organ]

Good job with the story, you know you don't have to be sorry. Your doing this all for free. Also can I send youn a friend request in steam

[Scorcher]

I really liked this story. Shame to see it go.

[ChrisTheCat]

882555
Yes. Yes you can.

[stalins organ]

Could you make an ending, please?

[ChrisTheCat]

986854
Maybe. Maybe not. You'll know if I do.

[stalins organ]

986857
okay

[Scoo]

Oh well. It was good while it lasted.

Happy for you about the relationship, though!

[dashdlkashd]

Hmmm, just finished reading this; shame you had to cancel this. Quite an interesting approach you took, never seen the 'straight up asshole' approach being used. I really enjoy the emotionless and calculating character of Christian. As much as I would love to see this continued, it only once more reminds me that all good things must come to an end.

[stalins organ]

You should write and ending, It's very good.

[OdinBrony]

i got sad when i started reading this only to see the on hiatus status but then to read this ad find out its canceled now i want to cry

[ChrisTheCat]

1876310
It was cancelled. I changed it to 'On Hiatus'. The reason should be self evident.

[King Trollestia]

1885844
Hiatus status aside, it's been nearly fifty weeks since your comment. Should it just as well still be marked cancelled?