When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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My heart is pounding in anticipation
Anyone else adding discord to their hit list?
Damn, my man wanted all the smoke.
I think some would disagree with that.
Wonder if he will go with vines or if he will try a different method given the previous failure.
this is so very hard to look at, some of these sentences make no sense. this is as far as I got before giving up
("Well she threw a rock at Berry Punch, it was very hard that we might have heard the sound of bone breaking." Lyra admitted. "Then he attacked to some several other ponies. After a few minutes this whole chase begun.”)
first you used she instead of he. a minor and fogivable mistake but also an easy to catch one on even a first pass for grammer and spelling corrections
second "it was very hard that we might have heard the sound of bone breaking" is gobbledygook and should be "it hit her hard enough that we heard bone breaking."
and finally "Then he attacked to some several other ponies" this word salad needs to be replaced with an actual sentence like " after that he started to attack random ponies in the crowd before running off and starting this chase."
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I see, let me fix those. You’re free to tell my mistakes btw, no worries.
Bruh ponk boi like :1v1 me' and got blasted, self defense like that.
And so did I. -> And so I did.
she threw a rock -> he
breaking."" Lyra - too many quotes
Rip and tear until it's done.
Nice! Looking for more !
Welp. All I can say now is there is no saving this. Jason is done. Pinkie damn near raped him for no reason. Rarity is a bitch. Dash got what she deserves. Applejack just needs a hug. And twilight needs to get her mind straight. Also Luna needs a hug. This will most likely be my only full length response. Unless asked otherwise.
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Thank you for the heads up.
I will wait to see where this goes before I make a full length comment, though I will say it’s interesting and I hope he takes a few of this fucktards down before he tries to kill himself Again!
RIP AND TEAR, UNTIL IT IS DONE!!
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Especially in desert regions or any area where vegetation is scarce.
Yes it’s back!
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Considering Twilight wants Jason dead, or is okay with that, I'd say she deserves way worse.
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"Wise man". It's Latin origin, not Greek.
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Adding? I refer you back to the conversation in chapter 29 in which he all but outright admitted to being responsible for Jason being in Equestria in the first place and probably don’t need to remind you that he has been shown manipulating events, ponies, and our human protagonist right since his first appeared in the story. Even if we’re to assume that he hasn’t actively “discorded” any ponies again and they’re just genuinely this dysfunctional all by themselves in this take on the setting already, I’d have a hard time coming up with an explanation that doesn’t leave him at least as much to blame and as unrepentant an asshole as any two or possibly more of them taken together.
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It’s actually been a while since I’ve read this.
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Whereas I’ve only just stumbled across it recently and so basically read it all in one go, yes. It’s all good.
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Oh ok.
Okay, I'm confused. Is Discord trying to help him or is he just fucking with him? No, seriously. One minute it looks like the former, but then we get scenes like this one that implies the latter.
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You’ll be reading soon in the ongoing chapter.
I like how Chapter 41 has two 'non-canons'
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Yeah, it was left from the former author. I didn’t bother to change it.
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Does that mean the two non-canons cancel themselves out, making it canon? Incredible!
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I don’t have enough experience with this level of absurdity. XD
Of course the ponies won’t admit they attacked him first with no provocation. Twilight is just gonna think he’s a remorseless killer.
Interesting direction you’re taking, but it’s weird that Jason is blaming himself when they were already trying to harm him.
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Let’s say, thing are slowly turning a bit.
Well he’s never killed and seems like the person even in self defense after he killed someone (which did happen) he will feel bad, he’s a great guy but he just gets fucked over by the ponies
Didn’t Berry Punch threw the rock at our MC or my mind is confused.
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She threw at him, then he took it up and returned the favor. xd
It’s like a game where you can throw back an enemy’s grenade but then like his whole team gets angry over it
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My feelings exactly!
New chapter idea Jason threatens everyone with a nuke they don’t believe that he has such a weapon and attack him so he sets it off and everyone dies
That’s reasonable
Wait…… so basically everyone.Everyone is going to die, I can roll with that
Once you realize what’s happening it turns into a great story
okay so i know what n/c means now,
i guess the Christmas special was double non-canon