When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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SUPRISE MOTHERFUCKER!
4950149 Holy fuck that was fast.
Ok, yeah, something is definitely wrong with him. Very, very wrong.
4950159 Because he's supposed to be in Canterlot. She was banking on Celestia picking him up so he was out of her mane.
Pack'a fuckin' cunts.
What happened at the end, I'm more tired than I thought and my brain has stopped working properly.
4950155 commenters are like ninja;
We hide in the shadow till the moment is right, and then we attack from all directions at once.
after reading this chapter, i'm ready for the next...
OMG YES!
4950176 Jayjay done got dragonmail'd.
Kick Twilights teeth in plzzzzzz
You might wanna change your opinion after this
4950170
That goes perfectly with your profile picture.
Wow Twilight you is a ***ch
4950176 If I may, Spike breathed flames on him. I think. Not entirely sure.
4950195 I'm sure he'll be pretty chill about it. At least for now.
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*finishes chapter*
Hehe heh, I'm really liking this. I think this may actually be a new top favorite of mine!
+1 Like
+1 Favorite
+1 Top Favorite
*tries clicking to next chapter*
Wha~? W-w-where's that little arrow?!
GOD DAMNIT!
Awesome. Just awesome. I certainly do like no-negative... Shit, I forgot his name. Anyway, an enjoyable chapter, and a huge difference from the past other ones in terms of tone. I love it. Keep up the great work! Oh, and the multiple chapters too!
4950180 Twilight, please do not send living things through the mail plzkthx?
does dragons fire work on humans?
4950264 No. Jason's dead.
THAT'S THE END EVERYBODY!
EDIT: Yes. Yes it does. I was being facetious
Uh, I just noticed a thing.
So, four chapters ago, this was said:
And in this chapter:
Uhm...shouldn't Golden Oaks be 'sploded?
4950274 Does anybody like that sparkly monstrosity of a castle?
What? No?
Treehouse it is then!
DAMN IT VLAD, I have to read a 40 page story tonight and you're churning out chapters like a fucking machine.
4950285
I thought it was ok? I mean they'd obviously rebuild the library somewhere since it was a public library so it isn't that hard to think of her moving into a rebuilt version.
Three days of updates!!
You have no idea how much I love you for this
4950271
haha you know that works better if you didnt add the last bit
4950285 inside looks cool, outside makes me want to vomit
It would of been cool if creatures from all over equas banned to together to make the palace which would explain the garish crystal
4950285 Your a tease you know that. You know we want confrontation and you keep dragging it out. you sir are an evil genius for dragging us along for this long. But for the love of God make it stop.
4950271 Don't make up words.
4950206 I get that a lot.
Oh boy... dis gon b gud
4950341 FACETIOUS: "Treating a serious or grave matter with deliberate lightheartedness or humor." Similar to Sarcastic, Ironic, and Being A Dick.
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It's nice to see updates coming so quickly, but that one didn't really move the plot forward. At least not until we know if Jason just got fax-machined back to the castle, set on fire, or third thing.
4950379 I think Vlad said he got faxed.
Usually, Twilight's my favorite pony. Here, though, let's just say I hope she gets a punishment befitting of her crimes.
MOAR!!!!
Whelp. I despise this version of Twilight. Absolutely nothing is going to make me see this version of her as anything less than an absolutely horrible xenophobic bitch.
4950442 I don't like her either. Wonder what would happen if all of her friends just left her?
4950450 MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
4949853 I didn't mean it as criticism against you what you have been able to do using that story so far is impressive. The conversations flow nicely and naturally and you have good passing. Its just that your building on top of what essentially is a foundation of swish cheese when with your talent you could have started from scratch as a remake with a much more solid foundation.
That said despite everything you still managed to make this story entertaining which is a testament to your talent as a writer and it is why you still have my fav and my like.
Come on repercussions... Any repercussions.
4950482 Thank you, that means a lot to me. This whole story started as a challenge, reading the original and goingmedia-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/41/67/bd/4167bd670bf5cc20fe0764932342e3c3.jpg
4950493 I remember the original. The pacing was rather destroyed and Twilight was about to get a stern talking to from Celestia.
Heh...the big tough stallion, afraid of a bald monkey.
afraid of a bald monkey.
bald monkey.
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I'm just waiting for him to find out that she treats him like the due to Sunset Shimmer... And then reveal to Twilight that "Sunset Shimmer is a Pony. Oh yeah, and she's your PREDECESSOR as Celestia's personal student. So, fuck all your shits you Xenophobic bitch."
4950537 Sunset didn't make Twilight hate humans. Cafeteria food did.
4950483
Against whom?
I so want to see ponies getting raked over the coals for their stupidity. Preferably by actually getting raked over the coals.