When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Looks like someone got the munchers! Also first! Woo. Been waiting to say that for a while.
4942683 Yay! thank you!
Luna rolls a critical SAN loss...
4942691 Here's a glass of water.
Don't want you dying of first.
yay
... This chapter is just... 'meh'. As you say, Token Dream Sequence.
Not bad, not necessarily good. It just exists. *shrug* Kinda what I expected from the Luna in Sleep Realm scene.
Ooh, Gustave! *hugs that chef* Griffins for the win!
4942702 Just had a shitload of stuff go down, things will pick back up here in a bit.
Someones hungry!~
i feel like true punishment is coming to the mane 6
Relevant...
4942709 He just choked a bitch and left another bitch tied up on the floor. It's becoming clearer that even if Jason isn't outright 'evil', he obviously doesn't give a fuck what happens to anypony around him.
Somebody's had a burst of inspiration! Four chapters in the last two days!
4942696 Jason rolls, hunger pains!
Oh my, has Luna inadvertently dispelled the fear he has of ponies? What is Jason wright, but a seething pile of anger? Oh, dis gon be gooood!
Luna will soon gain an appreciation for humanity. Yay!
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4942721 How do you turn a man into a monster?
You take away what makes him a man. You take away his home...
You take away his family...
You take away his dignity...
And lastly, you take away his fear.
Now, this man, hurting and angry, has nothing to lose. And only then does he have the ability to become a monster. But beware: The evil this creature is capable of will make you beg for forgiveness.
And there will be none.
Humans: Made of Indestructium.
Seriously though. If whatever you've done to one of us hasn't caused full on heart-stopped zero-brainwave death, it can be recovered from.
4942697
I did not consent. Rude.
Also, moar... like right now. I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it...
4942696 hi :D
That line is frightening. Absolutely, utterly terrifying.
I'm just gonna go find a corner to hide in. . .
4942736 Seriously? More? MORE?!
AH'VE GOT BLISTAHS ON ME FINGAHS!!!
4942705 Fair enough.
I always imagined an odd OC that could easily be replaced by Gustave... an open-minded chef -the OC was a pegasus- with a favor of his base food, but... is not opposed to griffin delicacies in small amounts, due to nomadic tendencies and that, in small amounts, he can still digest the meat. Ooh, bacon!
*other ponies look on in disgust, and said Mary-Suish OC shrugs*
It's nice to laugh at the self, even if it is immediately off-topic and about crappy characters for stories, in my case.
Seriously, considering he wasn't even beaten in Canterlot -that was indicated anyway, even with Gustave's apparent fear and shock at the end of the scene- it seems, ironically, that the Royal City of Canterlot is more tolerant than Ponyville, the town that, by the CMC, was proposed to be more open-minded. Heheheh.
Gustave: Everything?! Oui, oui! I'll be right with you! *rushes to pile the fruits, veggies, and meats -gasp- on the plate, and forks it over* Free of charge, monsieur! You... you really look like you could use the meal.
4942744
M8, I'm going insane here, argh.
I don't have my friends to play CS:GO with. D:
4942733
....drama queen much?
4942734
yeah but luna doesnt know that, its why shes so scared. imagine finding a creature smaller then a dragon and yet far more resilient, this creature is also very angry at ponies. that would suck hardcore!
4942733 I'm afraid I have to disagree with you. To turn a man into a monster, you need only make him stub his toe on the corner of the bench.
4942749 I'm a writer. Of COURSE I like drama.
4942741 Reminds me of the line Venom says when he's feeding on someone in the game Ultimate Spiderman for the Gamecube.
Meet Humanity, bitch.
4942744 *cracks whip* Back to work slave! XD
On a more serious note, keep up the good work. I'm so excited to see what happens next!
4942775 Humanity, FUCK YEAH!
Coming in to save the motherfucking day, yeah!
Humanity, FUCK YEAH!
Whatcha gonna do when we come for you now?
Celestia, your game is through
'Cause now you have to answer to
Humanity, FUCK YEAH!
WE NEED MORE!. Sweet retribution is almost at hand. It's so close I can almost taste it.
4942788 ... I hope Gustave becomes a friend... even if he IS terrified right now. Then again, he's a well-off chef... and a not-pony, yet his life is still good. ... That may create more conflict, unless Gustave has some crap of not being outright accepted at first. *shrug*
Also, a few chapters late, but... Twilight Sparkle? Y'see this newspaper? *whack* BAD! BAD PRINCESS!
45 updates?Vlad, you are a machine. Let me tenderly oil your moving parts.
At least he ran into a griffon chef, so he doesn't cause yet another panic if he asks for meat.
You know one thing I never got was, why doesn't Jason leave Equestria. He hates ponies, which is understandable. Why doesn't he just live with the Griffins? Of maybe the Zebras or at least leave the out skirts of Ponyville so Rainbow can't attack him.
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4942733 I couldn't help but think of the following quote reading the last few chapters
“He who makes a beast of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.”
― Samuel Johnson
Thanks for the quick updates and the interesting read!
4942177 I've been clinically depressed my entire life. Suicidally so. Even on good days I'll look at a bridge or skyscraper and think "I could end it right now."
It infects you. And once it gets inside, it changes you for life. No matter how good things get, there's always a whisper in the back of your mind.
4942709 Yeah, but first we have to wait for 30 more chapters.
4942788 For some reason I think that would fit in a Metal Gear Solid crossover
4942831 Only thirty?
Y'all misunderestimate my intelligentness.
Is it just me or someone else notic small mention of chrysalis few chapters ago?
4942819 How is he supposed to get there? Swim?
I believe this is appropriate.
4942733
I disagree with that, there are countless ways to create a monster
The Joker front batman lacks mental sanity
Hannibal Lecter has a thing for consuming human flesh
Jason Voorhes was bullied and drowned
Magneto saw his parents getting shot in front of him
You can take everything from a man like Job (check the book of job), he had everything taken from him and yet his will and devotion to God was stronger
If you want to make a man turn into a monster, you must add things not take them away
Add an unstable sanity, add a thirst for bloodshed and carnage, add the need to see the world burn, add an unquenchable anger towards injustice, add a lack of reason.
In the end it's up to the individual should the path of carnage and violence or a path of peace and prosperity be followed.
But how should I know, I am quite sane
4942829 *hugs*
4942829
Ouch. I'm sorry, dude
Now lets all take a moment of silence...
...
...
Now... marines! Get your gear ready! Get strapped in because we are gonna wack around that purple know it all until she's a red stain on our hands!
Then we take down Celestia for not keeping contact with him or going to him personally!
Then we turn the government into a republic!
Then we all vote Luna for president!
Ooorah?!
4942829
I might be the reverse of you. Rather than being in that "middle zone" where stuff is all fine, I just can't find the effort within myself to care. Kill myself? Way too much effort, man. Hate someone? Hate needs a capacity for emotion, etc. I'm sort of a shell.
Anyway, alright chapter.
4942916 OORAH!!