Measure of a Draconeqqus

by Ink Magic

Chapter 1

Celestia groaned softly, everything hurt, moving hurt, even breathing hurt. It was strange, being without her magic. It made her feel vulnerable, less defended. And perhaps that was true, if Tirek's treatment of her, Luna, and Cadence proved anything. Looking up, the sun princess saw Luna and Cadence laying not far away, their coats stained with blood, making Luna;s dark blue color look almost black and giving Cadence's light pink coat a rust color. Celestia's own pure white coat was stained pink with blood from the cuts Tirek had inflicted.

"Where did you hide your magic?!" Tirek's voice boomed throughout Tartarus.

"You will never have it, Tirek!" Celestia said, standing up and walking forward as much as the shackle around her foreleg would allow.

"Still will not tell me?" Tirek spoke in a taunting manner. "Well then, I will have to continue to persuade you!"

With that, the centaur grabbed a whip from where it hung nearby, drawing back his arm, aiming for Luna. Celestia stared as the whip came down with a sharp CRACK! and the moon princess cried out in pain. Celestia moved toward her sister, but was stopped by the shackle around her leg, she could do nothing for Luna or Cadence, she could only stand and stare as blow after blow was rained upon first Luna, then Cadence. Finally, Tirek turned to her, holding the whip high and bringing the blood coated device down.

CRACK!

Pain shot through Celestia's body, every single one of her nerves was on fire, was screaming in anguish. Blood and skin was ripped away as the whip moved upward again, drops of crimson adding to the dried blood already coating the ground. Another blow came down, and another. By ten lashes, tears streamed from the alicorn's eyes, by fifteen, she was whimpering slightly, and by twenty lashes, Celestia was screaming in pain. The pain was worse than any other Tirek had put them through, but she would not reveal that they had given Twilight their magic. No matter how bad the pain got, she would not tell Tirek a thing.

The whip was raised again, scattering even more crimson droplets of blood across the floor. The cruel instrument descended, and Celestia braced herself for another blow. But the blow never came.

A brownish blur rushed past Tirek and Discord appeared, standing over Celestia. The Draconequus gasped as fire raced through his body, but he didn't move from his position as a living shield. Tirek would not hurt Celestia again as long as Discord was around. The Lord of Chaos glared up at Tirek, an angry snarl on his face as he shot a bolt of magic at the centaur.

"Discord! Still loyal to these weak ponies?" Tirek spat. "Are you really as weak as my brother?"

The centaur spat out the word brother as if it were poison and raised the whip, clearly not caring that he was betraying Discord. Discord cried out slightly as the whip tore away flesh, but didn't move away from Celestia. Glancing at Luna and Cadence, Discord shot a bolt of magic towards their shackles, releasing the two princesses before doing the same with Celestia's shackle.

"Go!" he told the princesses, muscles tense as he prepared to leap at Tirek.

Celestia struggled to her hooves and joined Luna and Cadence, glancing back at Discord before the three mares began to gallop away. But they couldn't leave their rescuer, even of he had almost betrayed them. Celestia was the first to turn around, and what she saw made her gasp.

Discord had leaped at Tirek in an attempt to keep him distracted, but the centaur grabbed the Draconequus, opening his mouth as Discord struggled to free himself. Dark blueish chaos magic streamed from Discord into Tirek and Discord's yellow and red eyes clouded as the Draconequus stopped struggling as much.

"Discord!" Celestia cried, horror filling her voice as Discord fell to the ground, panting hard.

The pure white alicorn rushed to Discord's side, but was stopped by Tirek. The centaur glowered down at her, clearly realizing how he could further torture the princess. If this didn't make her tell him where they'd hidden their magic, nothing would. Tirek took a large, cruel looking blade made of a strange black metal, its hilt carved with skulls and its blade curved. Tirek picked Discord up with his magic, an orange glow surrounding the Draconequus, and raised the sword, ready to run Discord through. He looked at Celestia, pleased when he saw the horror stricken look on her face.

"Tell me where you hid your magic!" Tirek said, pressing the sword harder into Discord's torso.

"Don't, Celestia. I'm not worth it." Discord gasped, knowing that the princesses must have given their power to Twilight.

"T-Twilight Sparkle." Celestia murmured reluctantly. "We hid the magic in the fourth Alircorn princess."

"A fourth?" Tirek looked at Discord. "You never told me there was a fourth princess!"

Discord struggled as the sword was pressed even harder into him, a small trickle of blood flowing from where it pierced his torso. He hadn't told Tirek of Twilight because Twilight was Fluttershy's friend, he could never do anything that would harm Fluttershy or one of her friends. But now Tirek knew of Twilight, and Discord knew Tirek could kill him easily now. But the Draconequus wasn't prepared for what happened next.

Tirek plunged the sword into Discord's belly hard, causing the Lord of Chaos to scream as pain consumed him like fire. Tirek removed the sword, allowing Discord to fall to the ground, where he curled up, tears leaking from his eyes as ruby liquid gushed from his wound, pooling around him.

"No!" Celestia cried, Luna and Cadence staring as Discord fell.

The three princesses hurried forward, Celestia the first to reach Discord, who was sobbing now from the pain tearing through his long, lean body.

"Discord." Celestia whispered, holding Discord's body close. "Why?"

Discord shivered and coughed weakly. "B-because...I-I l-love you. I-I've...a-a-always...loved y-you, C-Ce-Celestia."

The Draconequus shuddered, coughed weakly, blood dribbling from his mouth, and exhaled slowly, the life leaving his battered body as his yellow and red eyes closed. A tear fell from Celestia's eye and landed on Discord's still form.

Author's Note:

Ugh. That ending doesn't seem like my best work. But in my defense, its 1 am and I've been working on this since 7:52pm. I just got around to watching the S4 finale and really thought they could have gone farther with Discord's learning about true friendship, though the part that really excited me was when Discord gave Celestia a bouquet of flowers. It got me thinking that maybe Discord did or does have a crush on Celestia, which would be awesome if it were canon because this is my MLP OTP. Anyway, since I LOVE angsty stories (especially angsty romance ones), I had to write this little AU. Thanks for reading! Bye for now!

PS. Look up Measure of a Man by heather Dale, it's a sad song that gave me the inspiration to write this.

Comments

[Unimpressive Chaos Lord]

I am in a dilemma in what concerns to the redaction. There are some flaws, such as your inability of using ";". But it was still a really good job. The description of Celestia´s torture was incredible, making her pain and the image formed by it extremely palpable. Discord´s sacrifice was really interesting too, and I must admit that I didn´t see that ending coming, I expected him to live and help the mane six, because, well, without Discord to give Twilight her key they are pretty much screwed. Tirek´s character suffers an obscure adulteration into a much more evil creature. However, that seems plausible. So it is a pretty good fanfic situated in an alternative time line, although I was pretty sure that Discord, if he actually put some effort on it could have defeated Tirek. For goodness sake, he is almost omnipotent!

[Catalysts Cradle]

This was alright for a short little vignette, and the concept is quite interesting. However, the story would have been more powerful had you delved more deeply into the reasons behind Discord's actions. Why does he join Tirek in the first place if he is in love with Celestia? What is his reaction when he learns of Tirek's plans to steal the princess' magic? What's going through his mind as he witnesses Celestia's torture?

"Measure of a Man" is also the title of one of the best (IMO) episodes of Star Trek:TNG, and given Discord's connecting to the show, I was hoping the story had some connection to that episode, but unfortunately it was not meant to be.

[Ink Magic]

4408729 Sorry about the confusion, I was unaware that there was a Star Trek episode and I may come back and fix this story later, when I don't have so much school work and other things hanging over my head.

[Pinkie Pie Smile HD]

This is a GoOoOoOoOoOd Story~! Keep doing My Victim Friend !

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Pinkie Pie Smile HD.-

[Ink Magic]

4407969 Thanks for the feedback. I shall remember it next time I write something. And I did think of Discord giving Twilight the key, I just needed to write something like this as a sort of AU. Maybe when I'm not as busy when things I'll expand this story into a What If and explore more of hoe Discord's death would have affected the Mane 6.

[Evia The Unicorn]

4408822 I want to hear that story, please continue!

[Kickback]

Dude...Whoa

[BioToxic Rage]

[WARNING THIS COMMENT IS A JOKE! DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY!]
WEAK!!!!!!!

[puppyhaa02]

That was... Dark... and I'm sorry, but I'm more of a Fluttercord mare... I DIED WHEN TIREK IMPALED DIS LIKE NO JOKE. I. AM. DEAD. DEAD I TELL YOU!!!!! XD

[The Spiral Staircase]

This could be how DayBreaker was born now that I think about it 🤔