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Ink Magic


I am Ink Magic, I serve Princess Luna as a simple scribe, tasked with writing all happenings within Equestria. I am also a loyal member of the New Lunar Republic!

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Discord is attacked by a mysterious pony with frightening power. He is left in the woods young and frightened. Fluttershy finds the infant Draconequus and takes him in. Fluttershy cares for Discord, and Discord comes to love the pegasus. When Twilight finds a new threat and alerts the Elements, Fluttershy realizes that it is the same mysterious pony who deaged Discord. Can they get Discord back to normal? And until they do, how bad can raising the Lord of Chaos possibly be?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 120 )

So far, so good. Keep up the good work! :pinkiesmile:

Nice and cute so far.
Spotted a single error:

he library and see if sje could find

Should be she.

Very cute story. I can't wait for more

So cute! I love baby Discord!
(even if I prefer to see these two romantically:raritywink:)

The story goes a little bit to fast by my taste

Nice, i like the idea!

Alright, I'll roll with it.

Looking good so far. A tad fast paced for this kind of story if you ask me but still. Hope to see more in the near future.

3595512 oops. Sorry, I didn't notice that...:derpyderp1: thanks for pointing that out! :twilightsmile:

3595642 Thanks for pointing that out! I did not notice that. Next chapter, I'll pay more attention to spelling.

3596787 sorry...I'll try to slow things down.

I absolutely love the idea of Mamashy, but I can't he'll but wonder why Discord is so eager to act like baby and why he isn't using his chaos magic.

:heart: Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh! IT'S SO FRIKIN ADORABLE! :rainbowkiss:

3599305 I kind of see your point there. In fact, if I was given the oppurtinity for Fluttershy to raise me as a baby, I would take it. Who wouldn't? :yay:

But most people wuld argue shipping between them, not a mother-child relationship.

AWWWWWWWW!!! SOOOOO CUTEE!!! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

*reads description*
*instant favorite*

I'll be reading this with gusto.

This is cute! Keep up the good work!

Yes, this is amazing, even if I think that the way he was so easily "defeated" was a bit too easy for the pony who did it. After all Discord IS the god of chaos and is still incredibly strong.

However, I already love this, please continue soon, but still remember to take your time making it as good as possible :twilightsmile:

ahem......... MOARE!!!!!!!! :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage: ((please))

Excuse me? Yeah, there's something wrong with this story...

...I can't find Chapter Two.

many D'awwwws were given that day.:yay:

hhhnnnggggg too cute.

I really like the concept of baby Discord being raised by Fluttershy. I think it has lots of potential. :rainbowkiss:

I thought it was odd how quickly Fluttershy figured out Discord was truly a baby. He is a shapeshifter and a prankster after all.

Fluttershy fed Discord, Angel, and the rest of her animal friends and started for the door. She wanted to go to he library and see if sje could find anything that explained what had happened to Discord, why he was now a...what were young Draconequuses called anyways?

"sje" should be "she"

Too cute. Must read more. Need more.

So many baby villains today

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Not sure if actual villain, or just Trollestia...

Also, ANOTHER! Uh... please?

And just like the inverted shadow:AAAAAAHHHHHH HNNNNGGGG AAAAHHHHHA

I have written a story about this myself, and I have to say, that without a doubt, that you've easily outdone me in the premise. Well done. :pinkiehappy:

I don't even have to read the chapter before liking this story. The cover art is all I need. :raritystarry: This story is bound to be glorious!

*reads cover instintly :heart:this.*
I like this ples continue:rainbowdetermined2:

go to he library and see if sje

I think you meant "the" and "she" right there.

Daaaaaaaa'w. A wee bit fast paced, but it does leave more time for Da'ws.
Another thing, why is Discord so eager to be babied by Fluttershy? I mean, he thousands of years old and has proven to be quite the troll, not to mention he seems to be aware that he's been de-aged, so why would be totally ok w- SHUT UP! Just accept it and move on! Enjoy the Daaaa'ws!

Please continue my good sir. (or ma'am)

3617314
I haven't read this yet, though I fully intend to. (I LOVE Baby Discord!)

I think it should be addressed that he might dislike being babied at first. However, my impression of a ready answer is that, if he is aware that he is now helpless, once he gets over such a new and bizarre feeling, he would have sense enough to recognize that he needs help.

If he was genuinely friends with Fluttershy beforehand, and he is open to new experiences, it would make sense. It could be that he never had a mother to begin with, which is possible depending on the handling of draconequus reproduction, or from him being the only one.

Alternatively, he is looking for old experiences that he hasn't had in a very, very long time. Considering that he's well over a thousand years old, and theoretically immortal, it could be nostalgia, or that the novelty has returned after such a long time, or just that he desperately needs comforting after such a traumatic experience.

If he trusts Fluttershy, then I think he'd be open to letting her mother him. Either way, it works so long as she doesn't get on his nerves. :pinkiesmile:

Crap... now I feel like giving this idea a shot myself. Noooo... I have 5 WIPs as it is, and one finished story that just needs revising and a fresh editing before publishing. :raritydespair:

3603048 It was the element of suprise that did him in, the pony knew to strake hard and strake fast In order to stop retaulation.

Wow, someone finally disliked this story. :ajsleepy:

WHO THE HELL WOULD DO THAT????!!!! :flutterrage:

This is nice. You've got my attention. :moustache:

3618587
Yeah, but I kinda feel like Discord would counter the surprise with quite the force of his own.
However, I rather have this story than don't have, it's a nice one and I like it xD

"Discor-oh." Twilight said, staring at the tiny Draconequus sitting between Fluttershy's wings.

Is Twilight jumping to conclusions again? We all know how well that ended for her last time.
*sidenote* I sense a lot of inbound chaos. Shall i begin dancing in the reversed falling chocolate rain?:pinkiecrazy:

Awesome! Accept a like and a favorite :ajsmug:

he is the dark night equestrian deserves, but not the one it wants

"Right here, Twi." The dragon replied, holding a large leather bound book.

:derpyderp1:
Leather? In Equestria? The cows are not going to be happy about this...

Amazing! My day is literally the best I've had in years, and an update, even if a small one, appears suddenly! :D

What I like about this fic, is that for now, it gives me same feel as an actual episode would. It's so packed with awesomeness but it just flies through the story. This is not a problem in my opinion, but I'd like to see as much of cute Discord taken care by Fluttershy as possible.

And nice job, the villain is "meh" but at least it's not "ridiculously meh" xD
I can see Dark Magic being able to do that to Discord, but only Dark Magic. And since we know near nothing about Sombra, it's fine to throw a brother in.
Good job!

3652462 Thanks! Your comment is greatly appreciated.:twilightsmile: And about the villain, I'll try to make him more interesting and less "meh". But I did figure Dark Magic would probably be the only thing that would stop Discord. I'm planning on writing some more about Noctis, like his past with Sombra. I'll most likely write in the form of a seperate story/one shot since i don't see any places where I might squeeze a chapter about them in.
As for more Discord and Fluttershy, there will be more in upcoming chapters. This story does revolve around those two, after all. So don't worry about not seeing them.

Great chapter :heart: the story so far




-Sly Moon-

My only questions are:

How did Noctis get resurrected?

Why didn't he help Sombra take over the Crystal Empire?

Why has he decided to reveal himself now?

3652610 I'm still working on Noctis, but he and Sombra were seperated when Celestia and Luna defeated them. Sombra was able to return, but Noctis had used much of his power fighting the princesses, so it took longer for him to gather enough strength to resurrect. But that theory is still being worked on, I'll be working on a little side story (most likely a one shot) about Sombra and Noctis that will hopefully anser your questions better. In this chapter, I justwanted to establish who Noctis is, laer chapters may uncover more about him. And keep an eye out for my Sombra/Noctis side story. :twilightsmile:

3652662 Okay, thanks for explain it that. I also think you should do a one-shot.

And I am also glad that you dealt with everypony' s questions concerning why Discord was so eager to be babies and have Fluttershy to be his mommy, not in a shipping way. (And I guess this would include diapers and bottles and stuff.)

3652556
The only reason it's"meh" so far is because I simply don't know anything about it.
It's actually more of a "cool meh" than "nah meh"... lolwat
So yeah, the villain seems pretty awesome, just a bit overpowered but HEY! Villains are always a bit OP in a way!

Edit:
HAPPAP! Posted before meant to.

He is not "OP OP", but rather "Show-accurate OP".

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