• Published 1st Apr 2012
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I Only Want You Gone - Derpintena



Sweetie Belle is faced with death

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Epilouge: If It Weren't so Sad

In a cold, dark, airless space Sweetie Belle awakens to see that she is really dead.

"I wish I didn't die, I at least want to be with my family again..." Sweetie Belle whisperedto no one knowing she would be alone forever...

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"You ok Rarity? You haven't eaten your dinner and it's your favorite." a yellow pegasus had been worried for her friend ever since the unicorn's sister was eaten a week ago...

"Hm? Oh I'm fine Fluttershy I just need some time alone." the unicorn lied, she felt so wierd, as if 99% of her had died.....

"Ok, I'll check on you in a bit..... hope you feel better too." Fluttershy knew what it was like to kill someone who was a part of your family.

"Thanks." Rarity went to her torture drawer and got out some nerotoxin in a vial. She called out to the house to gather aroundher.

Before they came Rarity quickly opened the vial and breathed in the poisen. When they came she said to the crowd, "I know I had my little sister killed but i regret it way too much and with that I breathed in nerotoxin so i can finally see her again and tell......her..........I'm.........sorry." the unicorn took in her last breathe holding out a piece of paper.....


"As you all witnessed I killed myself with a poisen, but there are some intructions you need to follow right after reading them.

1. Do what you did to my parents to me Pinkie I'm sure you have that taken care of

2.Take care of Scootalo, she was better than my real sister in my eyes

3.Keep doing what we did alive, make them feel fear as they perish."

Pinkie had just started doing the first one and was already done in 20 seconds.
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The lyrics to the song Rarity was singing when she checked on the fillies:

Well here we are again
It's always such a pleasure
Remember when you tried
to kill me twice?
Oh how we laughed and laughed
Except I wasn't laughing
Under the circumstances
I've been shockingly nice

You want your freedom?
Take it
That's what I'm counting on

I used to want you dead
but
Now I only want you gone

She was a lot like you
(Maybe not quite as heavy)
Now little Caroline is in here too
One day they woke me up
So I could live forever
It's such a shame the same
will never happen to you

You've got your
short sad
life left
That's what I'm counting on
I'll let you get right to it
Now I only want you gone

Goodbye my only friend
Oh, did you think I meant you?
That would be funny
if it weren't so sad
Well you have been replaced
I don't need anyone now
When I delete you maybe
I'll stop feeling so bad

Go make some new disaster
That's what I'm counting on
You're someone else's problem
Now I only want you gone
Now I only want you gone
Now I only want you...
gone

Comments ( 8 )

you got the lyric wrong in the chapters...its
"Oh how we laughed and laughed, except i wasn't laughing"

the "That would be funny, if it went so sad" is a different part...

392981 I was just picking random parts of the song

400799 oh, i thought i fixed the mistakes :flutterrage:

where is it so i can fix it?:twilightblush:

401244 :facehoof: its all in the first chapter im guessing ill proof read everything for now on :facehoof:

401253

Well, one thing that I think would help you quite a bit would be to just get in the habit of righting correctly in the first place.

505438 i know i rushed but i just wanted the story out of my head i guess it's back to more studying fanfics for me... *trails off* now where should i start on my favorites.. no i just finished that one.... BUCKING LAPTOP....(yea my latop kind of sucks)

505394 the scenes were in my head. i just coulnd't really form the words

392981>>393008>>400799>>489673>>991276>>502881 Hey y'all! This story is being rewritten :raritystarry: with hopefully a better understanding of the plot and how I want it to turn out, better detail, a load of grammer fixes, name it and i will fix it :twilightsmile:

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