Sweetie Belle had just learned a horrible secret about her older sister, but she can not tell the police now that she is strapped to a chair
Credit to MareInTheMoon for inspiring me to restore this story but tweaked
i couldnt find a picture with rarity fluttershy and pinkie pie all crazy so this will be a temperarory
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you got the lyric wrong in the chapters...its
"Oh how we laughed and laughed, except i wasn't laughing"
the "That would be funny, if it went so sad" is a different part...
I have to admit this was pretty bad. My hand did a triple ten eighty backflip then lurched itself through my face a hypersonic speeds. It hurts. It really hurts.
Stay frosty!
~Hazard~
392981 I was just picking random parts of the song
This might not be so bad if you didn't make mistakes like using the wrong "your/you're".
400799 oh, i thought i fixed the mistakes
where is it so i can fix it?
"You tried to turn us in, now your going to pay."
"C'mon lets hurry up and get back to my cottage before the animals suspect something is wrong"
"Yes we did, could you untie her from my back? Her struggleing gave me a couple bruises when we were running."
"I'll go make sure Angel is asleep, I dont want him to think differently of me."
I don't feel like proofreading the rest for you.
401244
its all in the first chapter im guessing ill proof read everything for now on 
401253
Well, one thing that I think would help you quite a bit would be to just get in the habit of righting correctly in the first place.
505438 i know i rushed but i just wanted the story out of my head i guess it's back to more studying fanfics for me... *trails off* now where should i start on my favorites.. no i just finished that one.... BUCKING LAPTOP....(yea my latop kind of sucks)
505394 the scenes were in my head. i just coulnd't really form the words
392981>>393008>>400799>>489673>>991276>>502881 Hey y'all! This story is being rewritten
with hopefully a better understanding of the plot and how I want it to turn out, better detail, a load of grammer fixes, name it and i will fix it 