A man named Eric was contacted by an old friend from collage to help test a newly developed form of entertainment known the Reality Simulator. A Device that is claimed by his friend to be the future of entertainment, capable of inserting the user into virtually designed realities with enough extremely realistic detail to make any modern videogame seem trivial. Eric agrees and becomes the first to test out this Reality Simulator.
However, something goes wrong and Eric is trapped in a what he assumes is a very strange virtual world and is left to question what is real and what is not...
Note: The Alternate reality tag is here because the MLP universe is not entirely the same as the show.
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hmm cool story bro. lets see where this leads.
4277898 Don't worry, it will go somewhere.
I just hope its not going down the drains at this point.
good intro, lets see how you hold up.
So he turned into a pegasus...so eventually I want some answers, for questions like "Did he disappear from the chair? If not, will he stay unconscious forever? How long will two hours actually be?"
4286672 Honestly, this would be a very boring story if I had just explained everything on the get go. I'm not going to explain the whole "Why the hell did he turn into a Pegasus of all things?", "Why the hell did he turn into anything at all?", or "Is he actually here or is this just the world the machine accidentally created?" just yet. Not only would it ruin any sort of mystery I intend to create with this story, but it would also make the story itself ultimately pointless.
So what I am trying to say here is, don't expect immediate answers within the very beginning of the story.
PS: I am not trying to be and ass here, I am simply explaining my reasons for writing it the way I did.
4278583 Thanks
4288467 no prob, no prob at all. I just expect answers in the story, immediate or not.
I'm excited to see where this is heading, seems to be a good read at this point.
That was good really good.
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Hm... I'll give it a solid maybe.
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