• Published 8th Apr 2014
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the world beyond - steeperswine



we have a type of story filled with action and adventure the main character Leo or Leonardo is a character who is very depressed and loves a good hunting trip and has every weapon in his cupboard! but is it enough to save the land of equestria?

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Leo's true form

I wake up in the morning and feel a bit stuck. I quickly jerked but was stopped by the rope holding my hands. I look up and see that all my friends where watching me.

"Err, what is this?" I ask politely

Then they backed off revealing princess Celestia. I can hear her memories and I know whats wrong.

"If your going to ask let me speak first. You think I'm the one who murdered those ponies,but no that is not the case. you see I wanted Twilight to go out to find evidence so why send her out on the night I may so called had a meeting. Also I told you they are not my friends but foe."

I force my memories into her mind, showing her about my innocence she respectfully nods. But without warning she falls on the floor unconscious and was stepped over by a gang of humans and one of them knocked me out.

I wake up Screaming in pain as I am surrounded by fire and all of the gang members around me. I look down and noticed that my feet and arms are nailed to a cross. I have been crucified to a cross and below me was a pentagram. It looks like a ritual about to summon a demon or something. One of the members goes into the middle and start saying mumbo jumbo and I thought that they where crazy. Until it happened.

Dust started to come out of my mouth, I feel the sands and dirt rising from my soul and after every spec came out a man was made in the middle of the pentagram.

"Ah nice to be out eh?" he said. it's the other me.

"But how? and why?" I said shocked

"You killed me with a dragon dagger, the dagger I told Zecora to give me. So I could kill myself. You see I was trapped in that place, couldn't leave because of the magic walls around my tomb, So ever since you came here it was all a plan. just to get me out! you know why I am you? Because your world is a fake! Everything about it is UNREAL, the point is dragging you here and it is to just let me out. The messages give the clues don't they?" He said evilly

I look back at the messages 'You and I are the same but only one can remain.' "I consumed you so one will remain."

"While the other survives" he said finishing my sentence "so you gained control while I remained in your soul. You are fake, your memories are fake. Everything you know is fake, your mother, father and everything you love will be and always will be FAKE!"

I look down laughing and said "I knew about your plan, I knew all along I said I will change this world. Also its fate."

As he looks around a beam of yellow light hits everybody except me and the other me and they all collapses on the ground.

"WHAT NO, BUT HOW!" he yells in anger.

"You know that I can read minds, but what you didn't know is that its not minds but the future. Everything About the mind reading was fake I'm just telling the future."

"But at Twilight's you read her mind!" he said shocked.

"Nope, I didn't I read the future and sensed that she told me later in the future."

Then Celestia landed right next to him and I said "See you at the moon!"

"And I will see you at hell!" he said smirking.

A knife strucked through my brain, ending my life instantly. I knew all along that that was the case, the case of my death The riddle kept reminding me through my thoughts. 'You and I are the same but only one can remain.' The real meaning is that I will die but you will be remained, or should I say contained. Heh I don't know but still this world is beyond great, this world is just beyond.

Author's Note:

and that my friends is the last chapter I hope you guys love it please write in the comments below for your thoughts and also be ready for the next book i'm making a remake of the anime series Baka and test summon the beasts. and the new book shall be called 'baka and test: Pony Edition

This one is going to be funny.

Comments ( 2 )

Dat description though.

i am going to ask my editor to edit this later after finishing other stories

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