the world beyond

by steeperswine

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we have a type of story filled with action and adventure the main character Leo or Leonardo is a character who is very depressed and loves a good hunting trip and has every weapon in his cupboard! but is it enough to save the land of equestria?

we have a type of story filled with action and adventure the main character Leo or Leonardo and is a character who is very depressed and loves a good hunting trip and has every weapon in his cupboard! also will he kill the ponys or fight with them to defeat the gang who are trying to kill Leo so he better watch his back!!! but is it enough to save the land of equestria from this evil gang?

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“Let’s set this straight, I don’t like you and I never will!”

Well this sucks. It’s the hundredth time I've been dumped by a girl" I thought
"Fine then, go, I don’t care!"
But I did, I really badly wanted her. If you have been alone all by yourself with no one to love, then you would be this desperate.

I turned my back on her.
A tear fell from my eye as I go about in my deep depression.
Then, I thought, "No one will love me and they never will!" So from trying to turn from my deep depression, I was just digging deeper.
As I walk home I always pass a forest and it always makes my spine chill, I always wondered, "Why?"
But, as always, good comes to defeat the bad as next door is my home.

It is a brick-layered home with only one window on the front, a cheaply-bought house. I always ask mum to move houses but she gives the same answer each time.

“No Leo, we don’t have enough money at the moment to change houses.”
I always wanted to move houses, my current cheap house holds little value to me.
Anything would be better.

Meanwhile, in Canterlot:

The two Princesses are watching over Equestria looking for any signs of trouble.

"Sister you look very upset, is there perhaps something wrong?" asked Princess Luna with a quiver in her voice.

"It is nothing sister, nothing at all." replied Princess Celestia as she gazed upon the city in a seemingly ethereal state.

"Sister something is very wrong. I can feel it in your conscious. That last experiment proved so." said Luna.

"As do I sister, I can feel it in my spine. I'm shivering, every time I look into the forest near Ponyville I just get..." Celestia paused. She shivered profusely.

In Sydney, Australia:

After a hard day at school. I will walk home. When I get home I will admire my arsenal of weapons in my cupboard.
It’s full of daggers, compound bows, swords and throwing knives; generally sharp objects that can be used to kill.

Before the accident, I would go hunting with my father.



“Mum?”, I say. Can I go hunting in the forest?”

“Yes Leo, but be safe.”

I hiked out to the forest's entrance, armed with only a bow, quiver, a machete, a hunting knife and a couple of throwing knives just for the fun of it.

I arrived at the entrance of the forest at 5:00 PM, it gave me shivers down my spine, “Why do I always do that!” I muttered to myself.
As I enter the forest I glance at my four arrows as a drew a single arrow and placed it in my bow, with the intent on finding an animal.

As I hike through the forest looking for prey, the sky darkens. A glance at my phone tells me that 3 hour has already passed. “It's getting late”, I thought to myself. I started to head home, but on my way home I spotted a rabbit, it was small, but it will have to do.
I drew back my bow and roughly aimed for the heart of the rabbit. it would be cruel to let it die in pain. As I drew back my arrow I exhale softly. My mind clicks as I fire the projectile. I lower my bow and see that I have missed the rabbit entirely. I scoff in disappointment as the rabbit turns and bolts.
I quickly glance over to where my brain calculated the arrow to be, and find it missing, I quickly give up and return home.


I walk in the house with dragging feet. I ignore the calls for dinner, and the questions from mum, like "How are you?", "What's wrong?" and such. Nothing would divert my attention from sleeping.


The next day, I begin my transit to school, walking. I decide to take a new path, in hopes of getting to school earlier, for very little reason other than just wanting to.
The new path involved many back-alleys and unknown pathways. I had spied them out on previous adventures to school.
I walk for roughly 15 minutes when I hear the sound of scuffling feet. I duck down behind several stacked cardboard boxes when I see a group of 3 older teenagers, all sporting gang colours and torn clothing. The most prominent colours that struck me most were Red and Yellow. I spy out from behind the boxes and notice that the gang are savagely beating a young man. I cringe as I hear their make-shift weapons slamming the man's body. The man is making very little sounds other than the man's weak grunting from the savage beats from the gang. I spy out further much to my own grief.
As I move my hand to support myself, I stumble it sharp piece of tin, or copper. I wrench my hand back in searing pain and move my other hand to hold it. This was my mistake, caused by natural human instincts. I fall down and kick the cardboard boxes over. This does little to hide my presence as the gang turns and sees me.
Very little can be said about what I saw at that moment. Their prying eyes froze me instantaneously. I didn't think, I turned, and ran.
Clutching my pierced hand, which was beginning to form a messy pool of blood in the cup of my hand, I pumped my legs hard until I managed to evade them. It was a frightening walk to my school as paranoia set in, the gang haunted me.


I arrive at my school, still puffing violently, running seemed to be the only thing that cooled my nerves. The large cobble-stoned gates welcomed me in a prison-like manner. They were saying;
"Welcome, you're not leaving until we ruin your day"
A heavy steel fence helped keep the torture contained, the advertisement's strewn upon them helped to keep the media turning a blind eye, concerning the truly brutal ways of the school-yard.
A good day at school was very rare. Many people made this a reality.


I sit in class, hiding my hand from the eyes of the other kids. I wanted to hide my wound, as they will no-doubt criticize me for my weakness.
The recess bell tolls, and I slowly stride out to the school grounds. A gravely familiar face greets me with a devilish smile. Funnily enough, wearing the same striking colours, Red and Yellow. I never noticed this before.
I became lazy and beckoned him away with my injured hand. He immediately notices the defect on my hand. He grabs my hand violently and with very little care about the pain that I feel. My whole hand shivers in searing pain, I cringe heavily and fall to my knee. The bully, still grasping my throbbing hand. He laughs and grips harder, this time blood oozes from the large gash on my hand, and I whimper in pain.
He turns his head and mutters to me.

"Heard about what you saw this morning"

I turn my head to him and my pupils instantly contract in horror. The gang followed me here. Not that they actually walked through the school gates, rather they walked into my nightmare.
The bully obviously had connections with this gang, either by family, friends or other means.
My life had just gone from bad, to hell.

I turn and cuss at him.
He didn't like that.
He thrusts my hand down, I follow through as I grab my hand to nurture it with my other.
The bully grabs me by the back of my collar and pushes my to the ground.
I don't remember much of what followed.
Just pain. Nothing more. Definitely nothing less.

Seems like I wasn't concussed, however I was very shocked. The bully did very little damage to me, he seemed to be jabbing me with the side of his fist. That would bruise. Still shocked however, I run towards the gates of the school, force them open, and run with tears streaming down my face and a violent sob, constantly erupting from my chest.

I run for what seemed like days.
Through the town, past the creeks, rivers and waterholes, through many dirt tracks, and finally I stopped myself and collapsed.
The entrance to the forest greets me. I notice no shiver down my spine, rather a force, welcoming me here. I felt enthralled by the forest and slowly, dragged myself into it.

I had lost track of time, I was far into the woods. it was dark. I had no sense of direction, I was lost. My heart sank.
Where on Earth was I?
Little did I know;
This wasn't Earth anymore.
This was heaven.

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Its been hours since I got into the forest, the darkness shivers my bones, it was cold, lost, and lonely. I wanted to go back but I know that they will be waiting for me, so I have to keep moving. I check my iPhone to see where I am. When I get it out of my pocket it said no signal.

"Damn" I thought in complete stress I started to panic "MUM...PLEASE I WANNA GO HOME"

I heard no answer. This nightmare is only the beginning

I start to run as fast as I could panic went over me until I reached the end of the forest and met a house. I calmed down and focused on the house. the house was made from a tree and surrounded by tons of bird stands and chicken coops.

I run up to the door and knock. I waited and waited but no one answered. then I started to become more stressed "PLEASE SOMEONE ANSWER ME! I"M LOST AND SCARED PLEASE HELP ME! I waited for an answer, a sound or voice. I sat at the door feeling hungry then I thought "hey would it be OK if I sneaked in and find something to eat?"

I thought about it for a minute and came to a conclusion that I was way too hungry to make a choose, but I gave up to my body and thought about how to get in the house for some food

I found two sticks and started to pick lock the door. I sneaked inside. Inside, there was a massive room full of bird stands and mouse holes and a couch in the middle and a fire place.

"Man this guy really likes his animal buddies, must be alone and he should put some rat or mouse poison in here!"

As I enter the kitchen I open the fridge and see a daisy and tons for food bags . "who keeps a daisy in here!" as I looked at the bags of food I came to a conclusion that this guy must be vegetarian and likes feeding his animal friends.

"I should be a detective" I thought with little mind.

As I was reaching for a carrot I heard the front door open.

"CRAP" I thought and dived behind a couch.

As I peer over the couch a women dressed in full yellow and a pink hat. she went in and closed the door.

"Oh my that was a really good dinner I should feed my friends and go to bed, i'm really tired" said the girl.

As she went to the fridge to get some food I noticed that she was walking on four legs. Four legs I thought then that means I have came to the conclusion of what she is.

"crazy cat lady" I thought as I identified the girl "definitely a crazy cat lady with out the cat part" . As I sneaked past by going through the other side of the couch one of the birds woke up and saw me and started to crow.

"shut up!" I whispered and the woman said "oh my Jackson your up late what is it?"

The bird started crowing and the woman said in a panic voice "their is a intruder here?"

"Shit" I said out loud and the woman said "who's there?"

After I heard her last words I started to sprint at the door I can hear her telling me to come back but I know that's just a death wish. As I ran to the door I slipped on a rug and banged my head on the floor and became unconscious.

As I woke up I was siting on a couch still in the crazy cat lady's house with a bandage on my head and a bandage on my hand, I look around to see if there was a way out. When I looked up I saw the crazy cat lady cooking something I turned and grabbed a knife from the table next to me and just as she turned around I hid the knife in my pocket.

as she walked up to me my concussion began to fade. As she got closer I began to notice her. When she was in front of me I saw that she was no human but a pony.

I suddenly screamed in the top of my voice and tried to get up, but i was knocked down again by my concussion.

She screamed and hide behind a bowl of soup.

"who are you!" I said

"I could ask you the same thing! Also did you just talk?"

"yes I just-talked" I said still shocked by what just happened. "Also who are you and where am I?"

She stopped hiding behind the bowl and said in a stuttering voice "well-well you are in Po-Ponyville."

"and where is this Ponyville" I said in a stern voice.

"in Equestria why?"

I didn't speak and tried to think, should I stab her then run away? Or should I just wake up now from my horrible nightmare? But if this is a nightmare then why is this so real?

"And what are you?" she said trying to sound brave.

"I am Leonardo but you can just call me Leo for short and also I'm a dominant species called human. Why, am I the first person to arrive in this place?"

"Well I never seen any animal like you and-"

"hang on" I interrupted "did you just call me an animal!"

"Yes I did because YOU are not a pony!"

Then I said "but I just talked so basically, I am not a animal, unlike you!"

"Now now Leo no need to raise your-"

"Wait" I interrupted "are those wings?" I said in surprise as I pointed at her hip.

She looked down and and said "why yes they are."

"So your a Pegasus?"

"Yes I am"

"So you are a animal!"

She glared at me and said "i'm going to take you to one of my friends so she can say if you are...OK or not, well if you want to."

I sighed and said "OK fine, but what would this prove?"

She looked in my eyes and said "to prove that you are not dangerous."

I look at her and said pointing at the bowl "Is that for me?"

She looked down at the soup and said "why yes it's called carrot soup I saw you holding that carrot while on the run! Also that was very rude of you to do such a thing you could of asked me for some food!"

I looked at her in a deadpan way and was about to speak. But instead I thought of a better way to make her feel like saying "yes I pardon you for what you have done" or something.

I look at her and tried to give my best puppy dog face and said "I'm sowy can you ever forgive me!"

She looked at me and said "of cause I can what friend would I be If I wasn't?"

I stared at her in a funny way and said "you consider me as a friend?"

"Yes" she said as she nodded.

"Ok" I said and whispered "base one!"

"Sorry what was that?" she asks.

"Nothing!" I respond

"Strange" she said "I thought I left my knife here next to the fork?"

"Don't worry" I said with a sneaky voice "I brought my own."

I sat down and started to eat my soup. As I ate my soup I thought "wish their was meat in it!"

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Here we are in twilight's library surrounded by stacks of books so high that I am worried that i'm going to be squished by them, and if that didn't kill me then I will probably die by boredom.

"No no NO!" twilight said angrily "I can't find anything based on" then twilight turns around pointing at me. "THAT!"

"hey!" I said "I find that very offensive!"

"Well" said twilight "I guess I could make a book based on YOUR information about YOUR kind."

"Alright." I said in a deadpan voice. Then I said in a very happy voice "well my kind is called a human, and if I was paying attention back in my PDH class, except I was busy being BORED, but I can tell you this. We humans can access 10% of our brain. Some may access 21 or 25 one guy can access 90%! but that was century's ago also a myth. The more you can access the more intelligent you are and the more things you can do."

Twilight stops writing for a second and says "interesting but does the brain in your species want to do something else?"

I just look at her in a deadpan way and said "what do you mean?"

"Well does your species do any harm for a reason or do they just do it whenever they want to?" said the purple unicorn.

"Sometimes we harm others to protect the ones we love, or the mental ones just kill for fun and revenge."

As she was writing I could hear he muttering to herself and she said "simple minded and want to kill"

"HEY I HEARD THAT!" I yelled in the top of my voice. "And first of all that is very rare and also we created things more than you will ever know!"

She quickly turned around in shock and said "but I-I didn't say anything!"

"Oh SURE you did I heard exactly what you said, you said that MY species are simple minded AND want to kill well guess what! I seen someone DIE before MY very eyes and I was shocked and sad. Have YOU seen someone die before YOUR eyes!" I said in a teary voice

When she looked at me in terror she said "no, no I haven't. Also how in Equestria did you read my thoughts?

"Read? I heard!" I snapped changing into my angry voice.

"No I was thinking it, strange I think you have some sort of connection with the pony mind like the human brain and the pony brain are like... bonded in a way" she said in a thoughtfully

"In what way?" I ask.

"Like you can read mine but I cant read yours as if my mind is being dominated by yours. Maybe it has got something to do with the brain waves or maybe MAGIC I don't really know!" twilight said in a confused voice.

"So I can read yours BUT you can't read mine?" I said smiling evilly "Interesting indeed."

"So what is the conclusion? Is he dangerous?" Fluttershy said while walking in.

"Well I don't really know" said twilight "so that is still the question we have not answer"

"Well ok twilight i'll keep my guard" after Fluttershy finished she was starring at me

"What?" I said

"You know what!" she answered back.

"No I really don't" I said in a deadpan voice. "So twilight can I leave now?"

"you may" twilight replied.

After getting out of her library I said to Fluttershy "Well see you later i'm just going to have a look around."

"OH NO YOU DON'T" she said "I am going with you just in case if you cause any trouble."

"O...k" I replied and continued walking to the town square mindlessly.

When I continued to walk into the middle, nobody was there I decided to call out "HELLO ANYONE HERE!"

No one replied and I turn around and said to Fluttershy "where are your little friends? Are you alone?"

After I finished my sentences and noticed that Fluttershy's face looked cold and scared.

"What?" I said when I felt someones breath behind me I said "there is someone behind me is there?" After finishing my sentence Fluttershy nodded like a person who has seen a ghost.

"Great just pure great a more depressing life!"

OH SHIZ ITS BAD

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As I turn around it was a massive army of ponies all of them are unicorns, but with fly like wings and holes in them. My first reaction was to take a photo with my phone, my next reaction was to run like hell.

I ran as fast as I could thinking they where after me but instead of me they aimed at the town. Shooting buildings with lasers, smashing stuff, just destroying everything pony's love. Rocks flying, children running it was all just so painful!

I stopped running after reaching the top of a hill and watched horribly at what they are doing.

When I turn my back I could hear there screams and thoughts in my mind. Screaming help asking for a hero. It Rushed through my bones making my face turn with rage and as I pull out knife I said to myself "boy I must be crazy but I just cant leave those dying ponies!

I chuck a rock at one of the charging solders. It hit him in the head knocking him out.

They all turn towards me in shock and what look liked anger. I yelled in the top of my lungs "STOP IT RIGHT NOW OR I WILL USE DEADLY FORCE!" I may have practiced sword fighting skills but is it enough to defeat the entire army?

One of them turned around and said "HA GOOD LUCK!"

After he said that I went berserk and one of them charge at me full thrust with there wings aiming for my belly. I put my knife into the air and said "I'M WARNING YOU BACK OFF NOW!" The army just laughed and continued destroying buildings and the one who is charging at me was nearly there "I WARNED YOU!"

As the pony was charging I closed my eyes, my heart was beating. This is it, this is war. I sliced down when I opened them I saw One half on my left and the other on my right. Blood and guts poured on each end into the soft green grass changing the color from green to red.

The army was shocked and one of them said "GET HIM!" After he said it I started to charge towards the army with my blood coated dagger."Fluttershy has one hell of a great sharpener! Ether that or their bones are weak" I thought as I ran into battle.

As I charged I saw something new I was charging at a army of ME'S as I ran I thought "what the actual shitlord"

When we where close I thought "this is it who will win?" and as we collided one of them throw a punch at me, I grabbed it in mid air and I twisted it's arm breaking it and kicking it from behind. Next one tried to grab me from behind and I just throw him over into my front and the one in front punched the one I throw over and after the punch I snapped Its neck and throw him to the one in front of me and went over to him and stabbed him into the throat. They all start to surround me and I began to smile thinking "I might make it out alive, I must!"

As they charge towards me I duck and do a twist diagonal uppercut cutting out all of there belly's and throats. the blood poured all over me guts began to dangle from my neck and I began to smile. as I continued to smile cutting the black fly winged ponies there was a big 4 meter tall pony and it screamed.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY CHANGELINGS!"

I smiled and said "whacha think chopping them up into little bits."

"Fine then" she said "lets make a deal you defeat me and my army will leave"

"and if I die?" I said

"then we continue with our destruction to Ponyville."

"DEAL" I yell out as I drove my knife at her.

When she saw it coming she jumped back cutting the side of her mouth "you little prick!"

She shape-shifted into me and throw a punch at me but I dodge it and twisted her arm into a lock and said "you know you should really not become me. Anyway do you give up?"

"NO" and she flicked her head back headbutting by face. She turned and pushed me into the ground and grabbed my knife and pointed it at my heart. I thought "oh shit, oh shit, oh shit!" and she said with a laugh "do YOU give up? Also any last words?" "yes" I said "can you please tell me with dirt in your mouth?"

When I finished I flicked some dirt in her face grabbed the knife and stabbed her into the heart. "You will always kill in cold blood." she hissed "Because you have done it once so you will do it again without hesitation, just like that so called accident with your father!"

I twisted the blade when she mention about my father and said "nobody fucks with MY brain."

When she laid dead I turned and yelled out in anger "ALL OF YOU! YOU WORK WITH ME NOW! GO HOME AND NEVER COME BACK! "

When I finished the sentence they all started to fly away in fear. I felt happy about my self saving this town and when I turned around I saw the towns people in pure shock and they looked horrified. I yell out "what? Whats the problem?"

One of them said "well, we have never seen somepony kill before in a thousand years."

yo princess celestia

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After those words, shocked I was I respond "Wait you have never heard of a punch?"

Then one of the ponies with glasses and looks like the mayor respond "yes but not what you just did we never had a proper war before with that type of violence!"

Then after they spoke a bright light beamed from the town square to all of the dead corpses disappeared into thin air and another beam dark as night shoot across the ponies hitting their minds. I was shocked at first thinking "that it would destroy them all", but no instead the beams disappeared and the ponies just looked around mindlessly.

There stood a two alicorns one is brighter than the sun itself with a sun type main and another dark as night with a dark blue main.

I was about to say something until I noticed that everyone was bowing to the two alicorns and I yelled out "great mind control what next ha? Making them give you a hoof shine!"

The two alicorns look up in shock and twilight runs next to me and said "Leo they are the two princesses that rule Equestria and also that is my teacher!"

One of the alicorns walk up to me and said "we need to speak to you, privately."

I decided to follow and they lead me to twilight's library. We walk in and they closed the door and said. "We don't know who you are but we would love you to go back where you came from and never come back."

I stare at them for a second and said "sorry can't happen! Don't know how!"

They look at me and said "and why not?"

I sat down and explained to them what happened and there eyes grew wider and wider. When I finished they respond "that explains why we had that weird feeling and how you got here."

"What do you mean?" I ask.

"Well I studied that their are these portals around equestria but they can't be seen. The only way you can tell you went through it. It is by a sudden warmth and if you are close a chill will down your spine. I can tell if somepony goes through because I put a spell in the air so I know when someone uses it or not. Every time somepony uses it I get shivers down my spine so I now what it means."

"Is there some way we could track these portals?" I asked hopefully.

Then the night princess responded "alas no we have tried many ways to do so but these portals are not natural."

I look at the princess of the sun and said "so is there anyway I could go home?"

"No i'm sorry" she said

I thought for a long minute and said "what about my moves, mind reading and stuff how does that work?"

"According to twilight's study about you humans can only access 10% of their brains, also you said they are the smartest species in the known universe current?" said the princess of the sun

"yes but we have created many things example." I pull out my iPhone and show them all of its features.

After I was done all of their mouths where wide open. So wide that You could fit 50 apples and then it would be full.

"What is this black magic!" said the princess of the sun, "I don't like this sister" said the princess of the night "I shall banish it into the moon where no harm can be done!"

"NO WAIT" I yell out in shock and confusion they stopped and turned to me. "Why shall I do so?" said the princess of the night

"It's meant to HELP the human race not destroy everything!"

they look confused but the princess of the sun said "anyway we are going off topic. The point is that when you access this world you can access 70% or more! that is why you know how to fight like that. You see something then you can do it "

I look at her in amazement and said "do you guys always get attacked like this?"

"Yes" they responded in a interest voice "how come?"

"Well I could help protect this town from anything evil. Only if I get to have a place to stay until I can leave. Deal?"

"What's you name?" they asked

"Leo, Leonardo and you?"

"Princess Celestia and Princess Luna" they said kindly

"Ok see ya princess cell" I said as i'm running out.

"IT'S PRINCESS CElestia" she stopped because I ran too fast.

"Well I guess its a deal"

it is a DRAGON!!!!

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As I was walking down to the center of Ponyville I spot a shop it was made out of chocolate and ginger bread. It also had a balcony on the top shaped like a cupcake with 3 candles. I walk into the shop and see tons of cakes. Chocolate cakes, cream cakes, daisy cakes! As I walk up to the counter a pink pony shoot up from nowhere and started to say mumble jumbo.

"Hi I'm Pinkie pie and I must say you are a weird looking thing, I'm not trying to offend you or anything but its very very true! Anyway you like cupcakes? I LIKE CUPCAKES!"

Then she leans in and said "don't tell anyone." then she leans back and said,

"But I want to know your name, oh please tell me your name please, please, please!!"

As she was hopping up and down like a mad person I put my hand above her head so she would jump into my hand to stop her and said "Its Leo."

"OHHHHH like Leoarna?

"No" I respond

"Leodia?"

"Nooooooo"

"Leo....?"

"It's Leonardo" I respond

"Leonardo, IT'S A GREAT NAME!" she screamed. Man I hate Squeakers

She handed me a cupcake and said "welcome to Ponyville!"

I got the cupcake and said "thank you... Pinkie Pie."

"Your welcome I cooked this up before you arrived just for you!."

I nod and then realize "wait how did you know I was coming here?"

"Easy my pinkie sense told me" she replied

"How does it work?" I ask.

"Easy if my tail is itchy then stuff is gonna start falling, and if my spine is itchy then a creature from a different dimension will come!"

"Weird, but cool, anyway gotta go."

I exit the building eating my cupcake until suddenly a dragon lands in the town square. What I noticed is that the dragon was red and yellow and it said to me

"SOMEONE WANTS YOU DEAD AND I'M GONNA GIVE THEM WHAT THEY WANT."

I place down my cupcake and looked up at the sky and yelled "you interrupted my cupcake FOR THIS!!!"

I pull out my knife and just when I do the dragons head reaches for me for a bite, but I leap out of the way and sliced some of its skin from its neck. blood was pouring from its neck it yells in pain turns to me and said "your gonna pay for that HUMAN."

It opens its mouth and fire shoots out. I dive out of the way as it burns a pie cart, I leap on its back and when I was about to stab it it swung its wing hitting me in the chest. I flew and hit a brick wall on a house. pain went up my spine and shoulder blades, and as I stood up the dragons head launched at me I couldn't do anything, my life is over. My depressing life as we know it is over.

That was when I heard her.

"LEO!" Fluttershy screamed. When I heard those words strength began to build and I got my knife and stabbed it in its mouth hitting its brain. blood poured everywhere and ran along the ground touching my feet. It's head fell on the ground and it just became a dead corpse on the ground. I sighed and then I fainted the pain on my spine was just too much.

I open my eyes and see 6 ponies 3 I know but the others I have no idea.

"Oh darling you look terrible in those clothes!" a white unicorn said.

"Wow best thing to come up with when I have saved YOUR FUCKING TOWN!" I said

"Well at lest you tried to save ma pie cart, I thank you for that one." said an orange pony.

"Wow you were awesome! you dodge it then you slice it! And crazy stuff happened. You are EPIC!" said a cyan pony with a rainbow main.

"Thanks guys" I said "anyway who are you?"

"Oh this is Rarity" twilight said pointing to the white one "This is Applejack" pointing to the orange one. "And this is rainbow dash" pointing to the one with a rainbow main.

"Charmed" I respond.

"Oh twilight I love his manners" said Rarity

After she finished the 2 princesses came in and said "can we talk to you in private."

the others left excepted for Twilight. "You too Twilight."

"Oh ok" and she left without another word.

"So what is it?" I ask.

"Well as you know before we used a memory charm on the villagers and..well we have decided that they deserve to the true meaning of the real world" said princess Celestia.

"We have been in peace for one thousand years and the reason why is because of memory charms and that is why there is no such thing as violence well since you have arrived we are tired of it and you can continue with your type of meaning, Saving Ponies."

"What my sister is trying to say" said princess Luna "is that we must accept that fact that violence is everywhere and we can't stop it so you must use it to stop it."

"Alright." I said "But if i'm going to be Ponyville's newest hero, then I am going to need a outfit! and proper weapons."

"OK there is a blacksmith in Ponyville and a fashion designer called Rarity."

"Oh god not her." I whisper.

"And I now I name you protector of Ponyville." she said "but there is only one rule!"

My eye brow raised and said "and what is it?"

"You shall not harm the good of pony kind" said princess Luna.

"As you wish." I said in a heroic voice as possible.

Must be black and no other

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After a few weeks of lying down on the hospital bed I went to see Twilight.

I go up to her and said "Where can I find a HUMAN clothes shop?"

she looked at me in a dumb way and said "there are no human clothes shops here, but there is a fashion shop that my friend Rarity owns and she might help you out."

"I know Princess Cell told me" I responded "show me where to go."

Twilight looked at me in surprise and said "when did the princess tell you to go to Rarity?"

After I just realized about what I said I am supposed to promise the princesses that I will keep this a secret about me protecting and keeping my identity just in case if a spy finds out and reports this to other enemies.

"Well the princess told me that I should get some cloths while i'm here."

"Of cause" twilight responded happily "silly me."

Twilight took me to a house that looked like a massive tent, "Clown house Heh what else" I thought.

"Here we are" Twilight said. As we walked in We saw tons of clothes and I hear Rarity yelling out "IN A MINUTE!"

We hear Rarity walking up to us saying while not looking at us "Welcome to Rarity's..." As she turned around her face dropped, "Oh it's you guys" she walks up to me and said "Well hello young one"

I look at her and said "how old are you?"

She looks at me in shook and responds "Twilight I think I regret what I said back at the hospital, he needs to learn some manners."

she turns to me and said "I am 14 why?"

I look at her and responded "Well for a starters i'm 15 so i'm technically older than you, secondly according to Twilight's library ponies live up to 35 ish?"

"Well yes bu-"

"So i'm older than you even when you DIE I will still be living because humans live till one hundred, any questions?"

She looked at me silently and said "well dear I understand, sorry."

When I looked at her she looked sad and pretty depressed. Just like me.

"No" I said "I'M sorry, I was a complete dush and totally wrecked your afternoon."

"Oh its alright dear" she said in a sad voice.

"Well, i'm here to get a new outfit, Can we start?"

"Oh yes of cause I just have to make a few measurements."

She brings out her tape measure and starts measuring. "These cloths you have are rather strange?" Rarity said.

"Well those weren't my best chose... but anyway they are my school cloths." I replied.

She stopped measuring and said in a questionable voice "My do you STILL go to school? Even know your age is big you must of repeated lots of times!"

"Oh no,no,no we have to go to school for 12-15 years, pre school first then kinder then year 1,2,3 until 12, then go to collage or university for a few more years then we are free to do whatever we want pretty much."

"So you go to school for 12-15 YEARS!" Twilight said, I forgotten she was still here.

"Heh I also haven't finished yet" I laughed.

"YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED! oh no,no,no,no YOU CAN'T BE A SCHOOL DROP OUT!"

"And why not?" I replied

"School is the most funnest thing EVER if you quit now you will feel sorry for leaving that school FOREVER!" Twilight yelled.

"BUT I CAN'T EVEN GO TO SCHOOL!" I said, "ALSO I HATE SCHOOL. Its the dumbest thing in history!"

"But you will finish school so you can go to school here"Twilight said "so you won't miss out on anything."

I look at her and said "Fine but just to tell you if I outsmart the teacher then do I HAVE to go to school?"

Twilight looks at me and said "Fine then If you outsmart the teacher then you can have classes with CELESTIAAAAA!" she screamed.

I fall to my knees with tears in my eyes and scream "NOOOOO WHY IS THIS HAPPENING!!!"

"Oh quit being a DRAMA queen" said Rarity "I still have to finish the measurements."

After the measurements Rarity got up and said "OK what do you want for your design?"

I thought for a moment and pulled out my iPhone and showed her a picture. "This is what I want."

It looks like a black outfit, with black leather gauntlets, black shin pads and a black hood. It had a throwing knife holder, bow holder and sword holder. it was so black that night itself could not see me.

"It's...interesting dear but would you like another colour like... white?"

"I look at her and said "first of all that's damn right crap it MUST be black and second that's just copy right abuse to the people who made assassins creed."

She put a confused face on and said "assassins creed? alright...black it is."

As she was working I thought to myself "I'm going to change this world. I'm going to make it a better place."

while she was making it Twilight butts in and said "come now Leo time for school!"

"What, now, already?" I panicked

"Jokes!" she laughs.

"Oh don't scare me like that." I said relived.

"But still you need to sleep until tomorrow that is when you start your first day at school in Ponyville."

"Please stop joking." I said.

"ho, ho, who said I was joking?" twilight said in a naughty voice.

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I woke up in Twilight's library. Celestias sun was shining, all was peace and quiet. I got up and went down stars. I sat down at the table waiting for breakfast.

Twilight comes in with breakfast and said "here's breakfast! I hope you like it!"

When I looked at my food it had the following ingredients.

toast, GOOD

lettuce, GOOD

daisy and hay, BAD

"What the fuck is this shit?" I said pointing at the daisy and hay.

"What, what is it?" Twilight said confused.

"Sorry if you don't know but humans don't eat DAISES or HAY!"

"Well i'm sorry but what do humans eat?"

"OK, lettuce=good, toast=good but the others. Bad. I suggest egg and bacon instead."

"OK" said twilight writing notes and said "we have eggs here but one question what is bacon?"

I look at her in a deadpan way and said in a deadpan voice "bacon comes from pigs, and its a meat."

She stops writing and said "so Human's eat meat? well i'm sorry but we do not eat meat and so should you."

"Fine" I said and started to head out the door. "I don't mind going vegetarian for a while." Then a purple aura picked me up and pulled me over back to Twilight.

"You are not going anywhere until after school." said Twilight.

"OH NO PLEASE I BEG YOU" I pleaded.

"Nope" she responded as she was dragging me to school with her purple aura.

Here I am in school, learning. Around a bunch of five year olds.

while I was in class a yellow pony next to me with a bow in her hair asks "are you new here?"

I look at her and respond in a sarcastic voice "why yes I am I thought no one will noticed!"

"Oh yea your the one that applejack was talking about. Hi i'm her sister Applebloom."

I sighed and said "hi i'm Leonardo but just call me Leo."

"please to meet ya." she replied.

"hello everypony" said a purple pony with a flower and a smile in the middle tattoo on her rear end.

"Hello miss Cheerilee!" said everybody in the classroom, well except for me.

"It looks like we have a new student today! please welcome Leo to the class." said miss Cheerilee

Everyone was clapping, but not just any type of clap, more like stomping on the table.

"Leo can you please come out the front and tell us where you are from?"

"Alright" I said in a evil voice. This is going to be fun.

one of the ponies raised there hoof and asked "Where did you used to live?"

"easy, I used to live in a planet called earth, until what happened."

"What happened?" said the class in interest.

"the world I used to live in was destroyed by the death star."

"Oh no" said the class "who did it?"

"A man called Hitler. He wanted to destroy all of the teletubbies and he used a death star to destroy them."

"OK" said one of the students. "do u have a family?"

"Of cause I do we are called the sons of anarchy!"

Then another student said "how was your world made?"

"Naturally" I said "na just kidding a hippi got his bong and summoned a genie and wished for happiness."

"OK last question, when was the last time you showered?"

"DIAMOND TIARA!" yelled the teacher.

"Its OK tech, I'll answer" I said in a evil voice again

"Well ms tiara I couldn't because a few weeks ago I was drinking and woke up with a old guy next to me in a bath tub and I couldn't use it because the old guy was. So I took a hike and got stabbed by a gorilla eating a banana and he grabbed me and throw me to north america. So I bungee jumped without the cord back to Australia and went home. Any questions?"

No one spoke a word because they where trying to find out about what happened just then.

"OK class" said the teacher breaking the silence, "today we are going to do some maths!"

"Oh no" I thought. I was terrible at maths and hope it was easy.

"Okay everypony the first question is... what is 130 + 300 ="

OH SHIT I don't know that one! Think, Think, Think!

Then a pony with a tattoo with a silver spoon said "The answer is 430."

"Correct Silver spoon" said miss Cheerilee the teacher

"Thank you," she said and then laughed and said "I bet the new guy didn't know!"

I whispered "Faggot"

"Leo" said Cheerilee "can you answer the next question?"

"Of cause" I responded

"Whats 230 x 686 = to?

my face suddenly dropped and I started to think really hard.

I can see that everyone in the class doesn't know it as well.

"errrrr" I said and then I realized back at the library when I mind readied Twilight, maybe I can do it to her?"

"The answer is 157,780!"

everyone in the class went silent and the teacher said "that is correct!"

"Now next one, What is 547 x 346 = to?

"189,262!" I responded

"correct and last one, what is..."

"145,790,652!" I interrupted

She looks at me shocked and surprised

"That is correct. You answered my questions even when I am still saying it that is AMAZING!"

After she spoke everyone went silent and then we heard the bell

"OK everypony it's recess!"

I sat down on a bench not eating anything because Twilight also made a daisy sandwich Applebloom and her three friends walked up to me and said "Hi, we are the Cutie Mark Crusaders!"

"The what now?" I asked.

"Cutie Mark Crusaders!" said Applebloom "but you can call us the CMC's."

"And may I ask what are they?" I replied.

"The CMC's are a group that finds a ponies special talent!"

I look at them in confusion and said "I don't get it."

They start to look at each other and said "you know? Cutie mark!"

I look at them and said "listen I am not interested into joining your cult."

"But it's not a cult! In a way, but a cutie mark is the mark on the back of there flank and that represents there one and only talent."

I listen as they continue "so if they have a hammer as there cutie mark then it could mean that they are great at building or something."

"So you guys help ponies who DON'T have a cutie mark" I respond.

"Eyep" said a white one.

"Hang on what are your names?" I responded.

"Oh" said Applebloom "this is Sweetie Bell" pointing to a white unicorn, "and this is Scootaloo" pointing to the orange Pegasus.

"So why you come to me?" I ask

"Well we didn't see that you had a cutie mark. So we just wanted to help you because back at class Silver bell was teasing you because you didn't have a cutie mark." said Sweetie Bell

I just stood there looking at them and said "my kind can't get cutie marks. So there is no point of her to tease me. Well I THINK that was teasing."

"WHAT" they said "YOU CAN'T GET A CUTIE MARK"

"Eyep" I said.

"Then how do you know what your talent is."

"Easy we just know" I said

"So you already have a talent?"

"Yes" I said "And I will prove it to you."

I pulled out three knifes (yes I know no knifes at school but just in case of another invasion I had to), and throw them at a tree. All three stuck in, next I ran and did a front flip grabbing the three knifes in mid air, next I chucked the knifes to my left hitting an apple a pony was holding and to my right hitting the mane of Applebloom not hitting her skull. Then I climbed up to the roof of the school and jumped down doing a commando roll and in mid roll throwing the knife in front of me hitting a massive overgrown spider.

As I got up I said "ta daaaa."

As I looked around everyone was hiding I turned around and saw the massive spider and said "can I have my knife back please?"

What do you do with a massive gigantic spider

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There I stood in front of a 8 legged spider. The most interesting thing is that the colors of the spider was red and yellow. the more I think about it the more truthful it becomes.

I grabbed the knife and yanked it out. It screamed in pain and knocked me on my back, when I got up I saw that it was heading for Applebloom.

"RUN!" I yelled hoping she could hear.

"I CAN'T" she screamed "MY HAIR IS STUCK!"

As what happened earlier I throw my knife and it got stuck in Applebloom's hair.so she couldn't move till I got it out.

"HEY UGLY COME AND FINISH YOUR MEAL!" I yelled at the spider.

The spider turned and did a cold rock hard glare, it ran towards me and and used one of its arms to throw me. I hit the ground hard and it went over me and started to use its web to make a cocoon with me inside. I was in too much pain to reacted and went out cold.

I woke up in a dark and stick space I began to realize that I was in a cocoon so I reach for my knife and start cutting away, trying desperately to get out of this sticky tomb.

I when I broke free I looked around and saw that I was on a massive spiders web in the forest. When I looked around I saw Applebloom trying to get away from the spider, the spider leaped at Applebloom and struck its teeth into her neck. Blood spurted everywhere and she screamed in horror "NO" I yelled forcing myself to throw my knife at the spider. The knife struck its back and it screamed in agony. It turned to me with a hiss and leaped onto the main web where I was.

I jumped only to be pulled back by the web that was holding me. I tried to get out of its grasp but as I looked up the spider was getting closer. I bite into the web causing it to break and I jumped over the spider pulling my knife out and landing on the ground safely.

I turn to its face and yell "WHY WON"T YOU FINISH ME INSTEAD OF HER!"

The spider just hissed and spat out some web nearly hitting my shoulder. I knew my knife wouldn't be enough to kill the spider so I turned around and began to run. While I ran I found a stick and jammed my knife into it and I turn around throwing my so called harpoon at its head. The spider still charged head on at me so I stood there ready to end this madness. I throw myself onto my back and leaped up colliding my feet with the stick making the harpoon go through its head and into the back of its body.

When I got up I ran over to Applebloom to see if she was OK. She was dying a very slow death, So I picked her up and ran into the forest looking for help.

I continued to run crying through the dark forest hoping to find a speck of light full of hope. I ran to a house full of weird statures and masks. I ran to the front door and yelled "PLEASE SOMEONE HELP HER."

This time a door opened and their in front of me was a zebra with a swirl as a cutie mark.

"Man this day gets weirder and weirder, but anyway can you help this pony?" I said

"Applebloom! yes you may enter. But please go to the center." said the zebra

I step inside and saw plants and herbs scatted everywhere also a cauldron in the middle of the room. She is ether a witch or a potions master.

"She got bitten by a spider and losing too much blood is there anything I can do?"

"Yes there is if you can identify this" she said sadly pointing at the bite.

"Quick pass me a book on spiders!" I said quickly when she handed me the book I started to turn the pagers faster and faster.

I came across a spider that looked exactly like it but the color was different. This one was white as light and the one I fought was red and yellow. "It was a spider like this one but different color." I said showing her.

"Oh a raknia spider, these are almost impossible to find. How did you come across so simple mind. But these spiders can change colors from pink to red and light to dark, the ones who owned this one wanted you gone. she said in her African voice.

"But is there a cure?" I said trying to rush her.

"The poison is in her veins, rushing towards her brain. So soon she might be dead, unless there is a cure she may be undead."

I look at her in a confused way "so IS there a cure?"

"Their is only one, but its deep in the forest. Where it lies is the hole, down down the rabbits hole and into the heart of the forest you will find the cure."

"OK I have to find the heart of the forest and find a hole to get me their, OK of I go." I said and I started to leave when she stopped me with something in her hooves.

"I have found this artifact while in the forest, I think it belongs to your kind."

There she held a dagger with a dragon on the hilt and a claw for the end of the hilt where the blade comes out. It looked in perfect condition and was very sharp.

"This according to study is a dragon lord dagger. only dragons can make this type of weaponry and I am surprised that your kind can use it." she said in a non rhyming voice.

"This looks magnificent I thank you for saving my friend and giving me this gift." I said thanking her.

I run out the door and through the forest the faster I am the more chance that she will survive. I run to a castle ruin and charged inside. I try to look around the dark castle, chills are running down my spine the same feeling when I got here. When I enter the library I looked through all of the books hoping there is some cure. Then it struck me, I can hear voices, voices around the library I hear children laugh and having fun, then I hear the voice of princess Celestia "come Luna this way I want to show you something,"

"What is it?" said Luna

"Just come!" I hear foot steps running through the library and I began to follow and I hear them say "nearly there come on!"

I approach a wall full of books and I can see one of the books slightly turning so I decide to turn it and a door opened.

"Look Luna a secret stair case!" said Celestia

"Are you sure that daddy said we can go down here?" said Luna

"No of cause not but daddy said that this is the heart of the forest we live in. The heart of Equestria!" said Celestia

"How do you know?" said Luna raising a eyebrow.

"Daddy talks in his sleep and gives away tons of information that is how I pranked you yesterday." said Celestia laughing

"Oh you little-" but then luna was cut off the memory finishing. I walked down the staircase and thought to myself, "down I go through the rabbits hole."

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I continue to walk down the stone staircase and I enter a big room in the middle there was a human siting in a meditating position.

"One half is filled with joy, the other poison." said the man

"O...K" I said in a poker face voice.

"I can see your thoughts" said the man "one half is full of love and friendship, tho the other filed with lost and sadness."

"Who are you?" I ask

"Who do you think?" said the man in a evil voice "I am the other half!"

The man rises and into the sunlight and he is...Me but with black eyes. The type of eyes that look down your soul and eat you up.

"Look I just came here for one thing" I said calmly.

"Well looks like you have to go through me!"

I pull out my dragon dagger but just as I did a stone was thrown at my leg giving it a sharp pain, "Oh did I just give you pain? Or was that SUFFERING." He dived at me and punched me in the face and jumped over me and also said "You know? I just want to say one thing before I end your suffering life." I turn around giving him a hook with my fist but was blocked by his arm and was kicked into the chest dropping the knife. "My father asked me to go on a hunting trip. So I said Yes dad that's a great idea but you know why it wasn't?"

"Shut up!" I yell getting up and throwing a punch at him only to be blocked again by the dagger.

"On the trip, the whole time I didn't shoot anything, just not one. Until the night where me and father laid in our beds I got up picked up the bow and searched for something to shoot." He explained.

"I SAID SHUT UP" I yelled in fear. I try to punch him in the stomach but he blocked it with his knife. Then he continued to explain

"I found a rabbit small, but enough I stretched out my bow aiming at its heart, then you know what happened next?"

"I KNOW AND THE FUCK UP" I yell in terror as I tackle him to the ground and as we where fighting for the knife he said.

"I shoot at it and it went through it well HIM and when I went to it guess what I saw?"

I grab the dagger and held it up in the air and when I stabbed him he yelled "YOUR FATHER!"

The evil me turned into dust and the wind blow it away and left a sentence in the dust.

You and I are the same but only one can remain.

"Heh" I said as I walk away to continue the search for the cure for my friend.

As I walked I saw something glowing. A white flower blooming in the dark room.

I rip it out and start my run straight to Applebloom hoping she will be saved.

I rush into the zebra's home giving her the flower. Her eyes widened in surprise and said "This flower belongs to the old king. Bring it to Applebloom to wait and see."

I give the flower to Applebloom and when she ate the flower nothing happened.

"Just give her time." she said

"Thank you again, and what is your name?" I respond

"I am Zecora" she said with a smile.


When I got to town everything was quite, not a sound or peep, only the soft wind through the trees. I look around and went to the pony bone yard. All the towns people gathered around a grave. The grave read APPLEBLOOM, As I approach everyone turned to me with shock and disgust. I went up to Applejack, she crying and when I was about to speak she spoke first.

"You did this! To ma family and friends, you don't deserve to be here!"

"Hang on a sec, wha?" I said shocked "What did I do now?"

"YOU KILLED APPLEBLOOM, MA SISTER, MA FAMILY. I hate you, I HATE YOU."

"What? No I was at Zecora's SAVING her not killing or whatever you said."

"NOW YOUR LYIN YOU TICK! you lie to me and ma family after killin Applebloom." She yelled while crying.

"BUT I SWEAR I DIDN'T KILL HER, after I was captured by that spider I had tried to save her, but she was bitten so I had to run to the other side of the WORLD just to find a cure for my FRIEND!" I said stressfully.

"Well where is she now?" she said while crying "well?"

"She is in a coma in Zecora's house." I said.

After I said it she started to run towards the forest with 5 friends following.

When we got there she charged into the house. Searching for Applebloom, she goes up to Zecora with a black stare and Zecora responded "She's in there."

Applejack enters the room seeing Applebloom in a bed fast asleep.

She goes up to me feeling happy and said "I'm sorry for blaming you like that, it's just that when She never got home ponies have been telling me that ma sister is kidnapped by you! And I thought she was dead! until now, you went across Equestria looking for the only cure and you have found it! I thank you!"

"Its cool" I said feeling good, "I'm happy that she is safe."

"By the way dear!" said Rarity smiling "your outfit is ready."

I smile and respond with a thank you and thought "This is it, the fake one is gone so now I can never be stopped!"

In the night.

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Months has passed in Ponyville, I have a home, a life, a new one too. I walk through Ponyville everyone smiles and I smile back, this place is calm and peaceful, but when things could be worse. "AHHHHH" I hear. I run though the alleyways and approached a young pony shaking in fear, she points at the end of the alleyway. I walk to the end and see a dead corpse. The body has been sliced open and the blood has been poured out. I hear my friends behind me and Rainbow Dash says.

"What happened!?"

Everyone looked behind me at the body and screamed. "I know" I said "this is the fourth time this week."

"Well now whats going to happen?" said Twilight

"Easy I have to go out at night." I said sadly


When the sun was down I waited for any trouble then when the sun was down I went out cold.

In the morning I was woken up by another scream. I rush to the pony and saw that this body has been smashed a lot with a hammer.

"I thought you said that you will investigate at night!" said Applejack

"I did!" I said "I looked around all night and nothing has happened."

"This is getting weird, five deaths this week it doesn't make sense." said Twilight.

"I agree, this is not normal." I said

"Not normal? Really?" said Rainbow dash.


In the next morning I get up, go to the mirror and see a sentence written in blood.

The killings will never stop until I'm out!

I look down at my hand and see blood on it. I screamed and everything went black.

I wake up in my bed and thought to myself "Wow what a nightmare." I go downstairs and open the fridge and saw tons of meat strips. "Well that's new" I thought "I haven't had any meat since-" then it hit me like a bat hitting my face. I fall on the floor and thought "I NEVER HAD MEAT IN HERE!"

I run outside and see a corpse in the town square. Rope was hung on its neck and its limbs had been ripped off. Slowly I realize that the meat in my fridge was probably from the-.

I began to throw up all over the ground thinking "What have I done?!" No I thought "no this can't be right, it can't I would remember. But those black outs, happening every night and those dreams? What the hell is going on?"

"Who would do such a thing?" said Rarity running behind me.

"Easy" I said "Another human but this one is more smarter. I hope my theory is correct.

"That's one possibility I guess." said Twilight.


In the night again I hide my iPhone in a corner and pressed record. Maybe I can figure this out with recording, so I got up and went to bed.

In the morning I get up and go to check my phone but what I noticed on the floor is more blood and it said.

HA HA NICE TRY

I go to my iPhone and go through my camera roll. "THE VIDEO WAS DELETED!" I thought "god damn it now what?"

I thought for a hour trying to make a plan then it hit me "of cause why didn't I think of this before!" and ran to my friends to tell them my plan.

"Na uh no WAY do you know how stupid it sounds?" said Twilight.

"But it could work!" I said "plus you never know what could happen and That isn't my whole theory anyway."

"Then what is the whole theory then?" said Rainbow Dash.

"Can't tell you but promise me you won't try to figure it out and also to trust me?" I said seriously.

everyone agreed and then I set my plan to work.

in the night my friends tied me down and let me sleep and in the morning I wake up still tied in the bed and I heard Twilight rush in and she said "Leo there is still killing's in Ponyville! Did you get what you want?"

"Eyep" I said proudly "I just discovered that the suspect is a human."

"What how?"

"After getting those messages I thought to myself maybe I wrote those messages myself? so I tied myself in bed and so what happened is that the killings still happened."

"So?" Twilight said worried.

"Well the victims where cut by a knife, a human knife, so therefore the suspect is a human trying to trick me into thinking that i'm losing my mind or something. Maybe i'm wrong, or right."

"Interesting theory" said Twilight. "Tonight I am going out to see if your correct."

"Twilight," I said "be careful"


When the moon was seen Twilight set of the look for a suspect. She wondered the streets for any sounds. She puts a spell into the air to see if there is any sound around Ponyville Then in a flick of a second she hears a muffle noise, she rushers towards the noise and when she goes around the corner she see's a half dead pony pointing at the direction the murderer went. She runs towards the direction seeing the murderer. she teleports towards the target and yells "ah ha!"

She sees the murderers face and was shocked in fear. It was a human the theory was correct! And he was red and yellow too.

she stops dead in her tracks, watching the human run away.


"LEO!" yelled Twilight "your correct! The theory is correct!"

"I know" I respond "I'm epic, now time to continue with the plan."

"And what is that?" said Twilight

"To capture him."


In the next night Twilight went through the town searching for the murderer, until she noticed something on the roof tops.

A human standing on the roof waiting for something. Twilight put a hearing spell in the air to over hear there conversation.

Another human went next to the first and began the conversation.

"Master we did everything you asked and yet the plan is working. Will the other know?"

"If all goes to plan then yes, he will know. In the End but do not mistaken him, he is cunning like me. Just remember the fake will stop in the end and we will rule this pathetic world. If I am not so mistaken Twilight will be hearing this right about now."

"How did he know?" thought twilight.

"Just hear me out twilight! read my voice burn it into your mind."

"No" thought Twilight "it can't be."

"Oh but it is my Twilight, It is and shall."

"Leo." said Twilight bursting in alarm.

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I wake up in the morning and feel a bit stuck. I quickly jerked but was stopped by the rope holding my hands. I look up and see that all my friends where watching me.

"Err, what is this?" I ask politely

Then they backed off revealing princess Celestia. I can hear her memories and I know whats wrong.

"If your going to ask let me speak first. You think I'm the one who murdered those ponies,but no that is not the case. you see I wanted Twilight to go out to find evidence so why send her out on the night I may so called had a meeting. Also I told you they are not my friends but foe."

I force my memories into her mind, showing her about my innocence she respectfully nods. But without warning she falls on the floor unconscious and was stepped over by a gang of humans and one of them knocked me out.

I wake up Screaming in pain as I am surrounded by fire and all of the gang members around me. I look down and noticed that my feet and arms are nailed to a cross. I have been crucified to a cross and below me was a pentagram. It looks like a ritual about to summon a demon or something. One of the members goes into the middle and start saying mumbo jumbo and I thought that they where crazy. Until it happened.

Dust started to come out of my mouth, I feel the sands and dirt rising from my soul and after every spec came out a man was made in the middle of the pentagram.

"Ah nice to be out eh?" he said. it's the other me.

"But how? and why?" I said shocked

"You killed me with a dragon dagger, the dagger I told Zecora to give me. So I could kill myself. You see I was trapped in that place, couldn't leave because of the magic walls around my tomb, So ever since you came here it was all a plan. just to get me out! you know why I am you? Because your world is a fake! Everything about it is UNREAL, the point is dragging you here and it is to just let me out. The messages give the clues don't they?" He said evilly

I look back at the messages 'You and I are the same but only one can remain.' "I consumed you so one will remain."

"While the other survives" he said finishing my sentence "so you gained control while I remained in your soul. You are fake, your memories are fake. Everything you know is fake, your mother, father and everything you love will be and always will be FAKE!"

I look down laughing and said "I knew about your plan, I knew all along I said I will change this world. Also its fate."

As he looks around a beam of yellow light hits everybody except me and the other me and they all collapses on the ground.

"WHAT NO, BUT HOW!" he yells in anger.

"You know that I can read minds, but what you didn't know is that its not minds but the future. Everything About the mind reading was fake I'm just telling the future."

"But at Twilight's you read her mind!" he said shocked.

"Nope, I didn't I read the future and sensed that she told me later in the future."

Then Celestia landed right next to him and I said "See you at the moon!"

"And I will see you at hell!" he said smirking.

A knife strucked through my brain, ending my life instantly. I knew all along that that was the case, the case of my death The riddle kept reminding me through my thoughts. 'You and I are the same but only one can remain.' The real meaning is that I will die but you will be remained, or should I say contained. Heh I don't know but still this world is beyond great, this world is just beyond.