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steeperswine


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we have a type of story filled with action and adventure the main character Leo or Leonardo and is a character who is very depressed and loves a good hunting trip and has every weapon in his cupboard! also will he kill the ponys or fight with them to defeat the gang who are trying to kill Leo so he better watch his back!!! but is it enough to save the land of equestria from this evil gang?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 9 )

Capitalization, my friend. :moustache:

Awsome! The blood! The gore! The glory!:pinkiecrazy:

told you I will make it up to you guys!!!:pinkiehappy:

OH SHIZ ITS BAD

Couldn't have said it more accurately myself...

i have improved chapter 1 on Friday the 25 of april and i am still improving the other chapters from pure wat to hell yea i like this book

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Dat description though.

i am going to ask my editor to edit this later after finishing other stories

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