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ReptiRosary


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This story takes place sometime after season 3 it details Cadence's life as ruler of the crystal empire, her struggles to keep her kingdom a beacon of peace and harmony. King Sombra attempts to overthrow Cadence and retake the crystal empire. His attempts shake Cadence, shining armor and Equestria to it's core. Will Cadence be able to maintain the peace and harmony of her kingdom as King Sombra wreaks havoc on everything she holds dear, including the life of her and Shining's unborn child?

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Dude, end of your description replace that period with a question mark. :twistnerd:

Comment posted by ReptiRosary deleted Apr 6th, 2014

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Sorry I wrote the description in a hurry before I went to bed. I don't see it now so I must have caught it when I updated the description today. :heart: I would love to hear your comments other than that on the story thus far though if you wouldn't mind. I would very much appreciate it! Thanks for reading!

Great so far, you have my favorite! :scootangel: Just a few moments in the story where you forget punctuation marks. . . .:unsuresweetie:

Clap, clap, clap. I've done this before in one of my stories. :applejackunsure: Just near the end you forget a comma and a question mark.

4198655 end of chapter 2? Yeah I'm going to be slowly revising it as I go. Ch 2 was kind of rough.

4199409 Sorry I didn't explain. . . .I meant I have written a short chapter that is near 770 words. :facehoof:

4199456 ah ok. Yeah, it just seemed like an ok place to stop

4199637 We all have someplace we need to stop and go. :coolphoto:

You did a fine chapter sir! I demand Sombralis. :derpytongue2:

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There may be a bit of light romance, not sure how their relationship is going to pan out yet.

4329421 It will start out professionaly, then slowly, if Sombra ends up saving her colony, her heart slowly starts to beat and she goes through the "What the hell am I feeling?" stage and then finds out she has fallen in love with him. :twilightsmile: Andthenclopficensues. JK. :rainbowkiss:

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Yeah maybe. I wanted to focus on Cadence and Shinings relationship. I may do a more extensive one about Chrissy and Sombra later though since I really loved writing this chapter :D

4332979 I will wait patiently and keep back my inner writing nerd. :twistnerd:

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