• Published 30th Mar 2014
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Just a peek - thestargrazer



Spike gets excited as he watches Twilight having fun in a heavily used diaper.

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Comments ( 13 )

didn't read

still, what the fuck

4157485
Don't question other people's fetishes. I wrote a fair warning, didn't I?

I read it work on your adjectives my friend
Also good luck :derpytongue2:

4157527
Eh, my English vocab in general should be improved. It's only a second language to me...
Good luck with what?

4157645 Good luck with writing Clop stories like here's a sentence she rubbed her her pussy until she started to moan.

wing boner :twilightsmile:

Very cute and sexy.

You hAve won first prize!

You win a happy feeling and a like!

absolutely loved it...favorite for a rainy day!

Nicely written. Quick, to-the-point, and paints a very good picture of what all is going on while allowing the imagination just enough space to have fun visualizing the scenario.

I particularly enjoyed the lead-up with the "crinkling" being potentially presents being wrapped. In this case, I would guess Spike got a different kind of present from Twili.

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I think I had the pleasure of reading other works by you. Nice to also see you post over on FA, too. Discovering you again was definitely well worth it.


If you have any other recommendations, I'm 100% all-in to read them.

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