• Member Since 20th Mar, 2014
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Lulumimibebe


Hallo, this is a shared account between me(Mimi), my cousin Bebe, and her sister Lulu! It's mainly me and Bebe on here, and we hope you'll enjoy our fanfiction!~

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Spike is just a baby dragon. He had a relatively normal life in Ponyville. He had good friends, good food, and Rarity. What more could he ever want?

I guess he never imagined he would want an alligator.

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If you're going to dislike, at least read the story first please. If you read it and still don't like it, please comment and tell me why. I can't get any better without your help!
This idea occurred to me one night. Yes, I know it's silly, and it's supposed to be. I hope you all enjoy it. Constructive criticism is welcome, but remember this is just a parody. ^^
Thanks!~

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Comments ( 12 )

I don't mean to be rude, but the only way I have ever thought that pairing could work is if it was NSFW, but that twist does work for it in the sense you were going for (comedy)

4108091 Well that's your opinion. ^^ It's not a serious ship either. Did you read the story?

4108098 sorry, I forgot to include the second half, I put it in not long after

4108103 I see. Well I'm glad you think it works. :) Thank you so much for reading!

This was a nice read before I start my day :pinkiehappy: Thank you.

4108463 Thank you for reading! That was really sweet of you to say. :twilightsmile:

Well, you certainly have a well rounded vocabulary, don't you. I'm not sure what to say about the story, as I just... I just don't know. Still, it was very well written, and I had a chuckle or two. Keep it up.

4135657 Thank you so much for commenting! Most of the words I had to use a thesaurus for. XD I would never use half of these words in real life. I know it's a little strange, but thank you for taking a chance on it. I really appreciate it. :pinkiesad2:

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Most of the words I had to use a thesaurus for.

With respect, that's... really not good.

Use the vocabulary you'd use normally. Now, if you want to convey a specific shade of meaning, by all means whip out the thesaurus until you find exactly the right word. But usually, you should be relying on your own resources.

Reading helps add to one's vocabulary.

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I used the thesaurus to find adjectives that started with a certain letter. For example, I wanted something that means is a synonym for purple, but I wanted it to start with s or at least an s sound so it would go with the word 'soft'. I came up with 'cerise' by looking through the thesaurus. I read a LOT, but I don't have a lot of specific, out of the ordinary words in my repertoire.

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