• Member Since 13th Mar, 2014
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skysthelimit


-15 y/o aspiring artist-

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My name is Shimmer In. This is the story of my life. This is the story of how I am different. This is the story of my time as a superhero. I know I am confusing you, so you should just read my story and find out how I became a loved, adored, happy pony when I started out as a laughingstock.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Sorry it's so short... It's my first story:fluttercry::twilightblush::derpyderp1:

This story is really intriguing, I would like to see what happens next if it wasn't spoiled by the summary.

how I became a happy and well loved pony

Or something like that.

What?! First of all, really short chapter, second,

With a burst of starlight, I made a costume appear

Okay, you just broke your own rules, I almost did a spit take. I thought the rules were "Shimmer In can change her species at will" not "Shimmer In can change her species at will and conjure up a suit at will" heck, the rules might as well be "Shimmer in can brake logic...at will"

Other than that...I like the power to change species, it's unique and I've never seen it before, however, I have seen the power you're trying to evolve that power into, total op-ness.

It's okay kid, I kinda like cellphone novels

Comment posted by skysthelimit deleted Feb 26th, 2015
Comment posted by skysthelimit deleted Feb 26th, 2015

It is indeed quite short, but the idea behind it is pretty great. With a bit more work it could be so much more

5671142 yea, I was gonna do more with it, but then I kinda lost interest...

And then I forgot about it...

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I'm sorry, for some reason I never saw your comment! But if you read carefully, she turned into an Alicorn, and then made the costume appear. An alicorn would have the power to conjure a costume up.

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