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The Wisdom and Trust of a Stranger

Placed in a similar context to human society, a true gentlecolt stumbles across an startled mare and teaches her a very important lesson

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gapaot

gapaot #1 · Oct 22nd, 2011 · · ·

Nice and wise. Thanks!

#2 · Oct 24th, 2011 · · ·

I was like :D. Then I was all like Why is there morals and crap in my ponies? Then it was well written and well done.

Good work.

Clover_Muffins

Clover_Muffins #3 · Oct 25th, 2011 · · ·

Very eloquent.

The Writer of Fate

The Writer of Fate #4 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · ·

Nicely done, but my one complaint here is the use of the flipped exclamation and question markers.

The English language does not use these symbols and I would highly recommend that you remove them post-haste because they break up the flow of the story.

RoflLuxRay

RoflLuxRay #5 · Nov 1st, 2011 · · ·

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I was actually wondering about these; Spanish DEMANDS them to be used since they mark the beggining of a question in the middle/beggining of text. I wanted to try these out and see what I got.

The correction is made mate, thanks for reading.

The Writer of Fate