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RoflLuxRay


Brony/Biologist/Tennis/Soccer Player. Oh, I write fan fiction too!!

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A rich British man takes on the mission of saving humanity through an elaborate plan that requires cooperation of both Human and Ponies, in an earth where makind faces its last days. Will he thrive? Or shall he fall to the sins of every human being?

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 35 )

It might get a little hard to read on the 4th chapter, due to all the technicalities I use. I tried to explain them the best as I could, but if you don't understand some, they all exist and are on wikipedia.

Thanks for your time

Hey, I remember this fic- part of the Conversion Bureau series, right? If it is, why not add the Conversion Bureau extension to the title so people know or whatever?

207 Yes, equestria daily classified it under TCB series because of its likeness with TCB. It's inspired by the work of Blaze, because I use some terms (ponyfication and the whole dimension shifting issue), but, personally do not consider it *purely* another universe from TCB.

But I'll tag *Based on concepts from: The conversion bureau* on the beggining of each chapter to let people know.

Thanks for the tip

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

LOL @ ME FOR POKING BUTTONS

knighty
Site Owner

Mmmmm I should really change that.....pretty god damn stupid on my part...

Nah, it was my bad for poking that button, bad habit of mine:twilightblush:. But it could use editing, to take down the fic temporarly to make massive edition, instead of deleting it from the archive.

knighty
Site Owner

Well it's changed now anyway, so you get a confirm box :P

The fic is finished, I completed it yesterday (YESSS:pinkiecrazy:)

I'll update with a new chapter every four days, stay tuned!

Thanks for your time reading my work!:twilightsmile:

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

Why do I get the feeling that Applejack and Applebloom are his wife and daughter?

1545 Because it looks like, there are reasons why they can be; and there are also reasons that proves otherwise... I left little pieces scattered throughout the fic...

The truth behind the Apple's past will be revealed in further chapters, thanks for commenting and reading!!!:twilightsmile:

Stay tuned for more tomorrow!!

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

Comment posted by Meta Knight deleted May 10th, 2017

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Area 51!:pinkiegasp:

This will be fun:pinkiehappy:

For that i do agree:pinkiehappy:



Oh i do wonder how he gonna get in at Area 51:twilightoops:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

a song for the end

FOOLY COOLY !

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"Ride on Shooting Star",.

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Slide of an orange reflects in the sky

Hanging the pride of a sponge

Spider

No need to hide

the premonition of life captured

it is like a colored dream

Ride on shooting star

I continued singing

like a shotgun with all my heart

A grunged hamster becomes more mature

and is accompanied by a lobster of revenge

Sniper

What do you say that

you can see in that framed world?

I want to touch it before you aim

Ride on shooting star

I'm looking for you and I'm having withdrawal symptoms

I lied to you

Ride on shooting star

I continued singing

like a shotgun with all my heart

Such a great story.

Damn, i was reluctant in reading this, mainly from the description, but after reading it... one of the better stories i have read :heart:

I am now very sad after reading this.
It makes things even worse to think about how everything ended...

So funny

It reminds me of tcb. Last man standing

Thanks everypony for reading!! I'm glad that the story was of your liking, I really poured a lot of my heart in it. Your comments mean a lot to me and encourage me to write some more. Expect more soon!! Thanks for reading again! :raritywink:

Oh my...:fluttershysad:

This was one of the best stories I have ever read aside from 'To be an alicorn', invoking thought and emotion. With some minor proof reading, any mistakes could be easily corrected.

As a final note; The hell is this? Your story is at least twice as good as mine yet mine has twice the reviews and a little better rating. :trixieshiftright:

Only the truly great stories are under appreciated I guess, I hope to see much more from you in the future.

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Thanks for reading, such comments mean a lot to me.

About the proofreading... yeah, I was thinking about making thos corrections on re-writing the story as a whole to make it more pleasant; I've been practicing after all. I have currently finished another story (but it's written in Spanish) and am working on another now on English along with an editor, so i'm expecting to post it in a couple of weeks or so.

Thanks for reading :twilightsmile:

James bond meets ponies.

That was an amazingly cliched story, and I loved every damn second of it.:twilightsmile: Before you even mentioned James Bond in the story that's all I could think of and it turned out true. Not a revolutionary story but a very fun one, especially after winding down from other Human stories where the authors try so hard to make their characters 'realistic'. Sometimes you just want the good guy to kick ass and for that this story can't be beat.

Thanks for the great read, and good luck to you on the rest of your stories.

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>chapter 666

Funny I find you here.:trixieshiftleft: (Oh God, I'm just kidding, put that banhammer down)

Calling it applebloom is Leighton's daughter

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