(Takes place right before the start of Season Three.)
What is wrong with Princess Celestia? After realizing that she and her sister will never again use the power of the Elements of Harmony, she becomes tense and distant. As she starts to be less and like her former self, it's clear that she is planning something, but no one can imagine what it could be. Princess Luna seeks help from the Mane Six, but they are as powerless as she is to prevent the inevitable....
The Cover is a vector by: http://fc05.deviantart.net and is mostly a placeholder until I find a certain other image....
Chapters (4)
And I thought I'd said something with the first chapter. Silly me, assuming stuff.
Anyways, there needs to be some space between paragraphs or an indent to show where a new one starts. As it is now, it's very easy to lose your place and re-read or skip sections of the story.
Other than that flaw, I enjoy the story greatly.
You've captured emotions perfectly, and it's pleasant to read! Awesome.
Dropped in a like.
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Thank you! I spent forever trying to make the emotions perfect in the last chapter.
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Noted, trying to figure out how formatting here works. Thanks for the fav