Holy fuck this story is some of the hottest shit I've seen here for a while... ...uh, I mean, good job... pretty nice... I'm totally not into anthro... or futafics... nope... ... ...not quite convincing you am I?
4133478 <.< >.> Don't click on my story, 'Something New'.
4133495 4134000 Well, if you'd like to know... too bad, because I'm keeping the suspense about it. ^.^
4133501 I'll do my best. ^.^ I fear the next one may be the weakest chapter in the fic, but it should still be pretty good.
4133710 4133805 Sadly, though, my other clopfic of the day didn't feature. So, I have not yet achieved my goal of 'two fics in the feature box at the same time'.
(To give a serious answer, though... The show has a lack of good, well-developed stallion characters. So, if good old-fashioned penetrative sex is what lights your fire, you're stuck with using background characters or overused cliches. With the magic of futa, though, you can use these lovely female characters we have and still get that 'straight' sex you like. Everybody wins. That's why everyone here loves futa so much. Personally, I don't find the whole 'chick with a dick' to be any sexier than your standard stallion-on-mare action... but it is a suitable substitute, and it lets me use a much better selection of canon characters.)
4135262 I most definitely will. Great story. Maybe one day, I'll do a reading for it on YouTube. How's that sound? I'll have to get my shit together, though. Due to a lot of stress, Brony Readings is a no no for the time being.
I have to say I love it! I very much applaud your use of Pinkie as the futa, she can be a bit difficult to work with in clop as I have noticed, also you nailed Twilight's perceptive eye in my opinion.
4135512 Oh, I don't mind it being on youtube! I'd be happy for the publicity, and flattered that you'd think my fic is worth reading, especially with how long it is.
It's just... I dunno... I've never listened to audio erotic fiction before... certainly not my own... and certainly not in a man's (I assume you're male) voice.
4135545 Anybody can, though. You've just gotta put in the effort. My first feature box came as a surprise, and probably only made it because of the unique concept.... My second (and this, my third), though, I was sure both of them would feature before I ever hit the submit button. It's because of how much effort I've put into refining them. One in a Million, my second featured, I put about 9 months of work into. This one... *checks* ... I've been working on since January 12th this year. Heck, you know that I've put a lot of refining into it, being one of my editors!
When skill and hard work combine, that's where the magic happens. (And the skill itself is the result of a lot of hard work, too.) If you've got the skills, then put in the hard work, and I think It'll happen for you, too.
4135585 I'm doing a series; I want to do one clopfic for each of the mane 6. This is Pinkie's. I'm just glad I didn't go with my original idea of doing in the 1st person. "My big pink submarine dove nose-first into her depths. With one last groan, I fired my white torpedoes." That would be just a little too... Pinkie. It might be fun to write... and hilarious to read, but it wouldn't be sexy.
I much prefer this slightly more reserved looking from the outside in. Then I can write her as the happy-go-lucky, 'Sex is fun, and I've got a fancy new dick! Let's fuck!' party girl.
4135636 Well, yeah... I'd love to see you make a youtube version. I just might be a little creeped out if I try to listen to it. (A sensual, female voice though... I could get into that, I think. )
4135703 Well if Derpy would stop being so camera-shy, maybe you could get just that. Derpy: I will NOT go in front of that webcam! Besides, everypony you've done readings for likes it when you read! You're the one with the amazing voice, as they say.
4135703 I like the idea, and maybe in the future you can give me tips on how to write a captivating clop like this I've been meaning to do one for a while actually, just can't decide specifics..
Loving this sensual fic and dang you for not (apparently) going further with Twilight than that. I'd figure Twilight actually deserved more.
Now we just need more fetishes in here since Bondage was in the first...
Makes me think of Crowley and how he tries to... 'incept' fetishes in us with his stories.
I just do wonder though, is Pinkie actually fertile? If she is, then things can take quite a big turn. Let's just hope she doesn't get lost in that cloud of lust up there where she kidnaps all her five friends and have an orgy.
Wait... I'd better stop before a list of fetishes pop up in my comment
4138009 Heh, double D picture more like it. For my edited version, just click the pic at the top; it's the only place you'll find it online. For the original (deemed NSFW by fimfic mods, mind you): http://derpibooru.org/173040.
Loving this sensual fic and dang you for not (apparently) going further with Twilight than that. I'd figure Twilight actually deserved more.
She'll get more. Just wait until the last chapter.
Now we just need more fetishes in here since Bondage was in the first... Makes me think of Crowley and how he tries to... 'incept' fetishes in us with his stories.
Well, to tell without giving too much away, expect one ATM scene and one dirty talker. I'll let you guess which is which. Not to mention the last chapter which is just...
I just do wonder though, is Pinkie actually fertile? If she is, then things can take quite a big turn.
I'll cover that in the last chapter, but no, she's not.
where she kidnaps all her five friends and have an orgy.
... kind of the other way around, actually.
Wait... I'd better stop before a list of fetishes pop up in my comment
Heh, well, this fic isn't meant to be a showcase of different fetishes. I wanted it to be a showcase of each of the mane 6's bodies, personalities, and sexual style. I tried very hard to make sure each chapter was a new and unique experience.
why is it in so many stories like this Twilight is portrayed as either a complete virgin or close to it in this case concerning males, some even have her not knowing how sex works, and nearly all have her as the petite school girl, which would be fine on the earlier versions of Twilight but she's an alicorn she grows, why not play with that a little why not have her fill out some more, I never understood why so many people don't want to do anything with the changes she goes through or have her act like an adult that can talk about sex in a mature manner, at least here she's shown to be open to new things, I guess im just getting tired of seeing her portrayed the same way over and over, still over all this is a fun story.
unf.
That was quite good, Twilight managed to be sexy and cute (in that inexperienced kind of way) at the same time.
*saves for later*
see you later! ho ho ho!
4131878
Yay for no stallions! I had to stop going to equestria after dark because it turned to +50% gay stuff.
Hmmm...I am curious as to who is next...Guess I will find out.
Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
congratulations on getting featured.
4133472 Ahh 4Chan.
Ey, feature
Yeah, um... I'm gonna give this a like and a fave, then change articles of clothing.
Murr~ :3
Im quite curious who will get her share of the new and improved Pinkie 2.0 next.
Holy fuck this story is some of the hottest shit I've seen here for a while...
...uh, I mean, good job... pretty nice... I'm totally not into anthro... or futafics... nope...
...
...not quite convincing you am I?
Nice chapte- FUCK, ALL OVER MY KEYBOARD AGAIN!
Er, I mean, nice chapter, I'm liking it!
(I need to clean the keys on this thing...)
...Am I seriously the only person on Fimfiction that does not have a fetish for penis ponies? This is an inquiry that I would like to have answered.
4135063 KILL THE NAY-SAYER!
4135242 Dude, that's roll playing. According to Knighty, you can be banned for that. Just looking out for you.
4135246 Shit.
4135246 Deleted it.
4132658
[sensual typing intensifies]
4132665
Good, just what I was going for.
4132871
I'll be waiting!
4133478
<.<
>.>
Don't click on my story, 'Something New'.
4133495
4134000
Well, if you'd like to know... too bad, because I'm keeping the suspense about it. ^.^
4133501
I'll do my best. ^.^
I fear the next one may be the weakest chapter in the fic, but it should still be pretty good.
4133710
4133805
Sadly, though, my other clopfic of the day didn't feature.
So, I have not yet achieved my goal of 'two fics in the feature box at the same time'.
4133922
Make sure you bring extras tomorrow! ^.^
4134130
Not quite.
Who doesn't like anthro futa?
4134915
Better keep a few spare keyboards handy. There's more where that came from!
4135063
Yes, yes you are the only one.
(To give a serious answer, though... The show has a lack of good, well-developed stallion characters. So, if good old-fashioned penetrative sex is what lights your fire, you're stuck with using background characters or overused cliches. With the magic of futa, though, you can use these lovely female characters we have and still get that 'straight' sex you like. Everybody wins. That's why everyone here loves futa so much. Personally, I don't find the whole 'chick with a dick' to be any sexier than your standard stallion-on-mare action... but it is a suitable substitute, and it lets me use a much better selection of canon characters.)
4135262
Least you accomplished what I cannot.
4135262 Good. I am just curious...It doesn't bother me to wait. It never really has.
4135262 I most definitely will. Great story. Maybe one day, I'll do a reading for it on YouTube. How's that sound? I'll have to get my shit together, though. Due to a lot of stress, Brony Readings is a no no for the time being.
4135296
You've never featured?
Makes me feel bad for trying to hog the whole box.
4135370
Well, I hope you'll enjoy it. ^.^
4135421
...Hearing some guy read my own clopfic back to me...
Not sure how I feel about that.
4135503 Well, if you don't like the idea of it on YouTube, it's okay. I understand.
4135503
Some people are meant for it I suppose.
I have to say I love it! I very much applaud your use of Pinkie as the futa, she can be a bit difficult to work with in clop as I have noticed, also you nailed Twilight's perceptive eye in my opinion.
In short and liked, favorited
4135512
Oh, I don't mind it being on youtube! I'd be happy for the publicity, and flattered that you'd think my fic is worth reading, especially with how long it is.
It's just... I dunno... I've never listened to audio erotic fiction before... certainly not my own... and certainly not in a man's (I assume you're male) voice.
4135545
Anybody can, though. You've just gotta put in the effort.
My first feature box came as a surprise, and probably only made it because of the unique concept....
My second (and this, my third), though, I was sure both of them would feature before I ever hit the submit button. It's because of how much effort I've put into refining them.
One in a Million, my second featured, I put about 9 months of work into.
This one... *checks* ... I've been working on since January 12th this year. Heck, you know that I've put a lot of refining into it, being one of my editors!
When skill and hard work combine, that's where the magic happens.
(And the skill itself is the result of a lot of hard work, too.)
If you've got the skills, then put in the hard work, and I think It'll happen for you, too.
4135629 Yeah, I'm male. They call me the Brony turned Pony because of...well, I'll let this very pony next to me explain.
Derpy: Because of me!
4135629
Whatevs.
4135585
I'm doing a series; I want to do one clopfic for each of the mane 6.
This is Pinkie's.
I'm just glad I didn't go with my original idea of doing in the 1st person.
"My big pink submarine dove nose-first into her depths. With one last groan, I fired my white torpedoes."
That would be just a little too... Pinkie.
It might be fun to write... and hilarious to read, but it wouldn't be sexy.
I much prefer this slightly more reserved looking from the outside in. Then I can write her as the happy-go-lucky, 'Sex is fun, and I've got a fancy new dick! Let's fuck!' party girl.
4135636
Well, yeah...
I'd love to see you make a youtube version. I just might be a little creeped out if I try to listen to it.
(A sensual, female voice though... I could get into that, I think. )
4135703 Well if Derpy would stop being so camera-shy, maybe you could get just that.
Derpy: I will NOT go in front of that webcam! Besides, everypony you've done readings for likes it when you read! You're the one with the amazing voice, as they say.
4135703 I like the idea, and maybe in the future you can give me tips on how to write a captivating clop like this I've been meaning to do one for a while actually, just can't decide specifics..
4135710
Well, I wouldn't want to traumatize Derpy!
4135765
Try entering a contest maybe?
(This one will be in the My Little Fetish group's Futa February contest. I think it's a contender. )
I'm not sure how I feel about this fic yet.
Loving this sensual fic and dang you for not (apparently) going further with Twilight than that. I'd figure Twilight actually deserved more.
Now we just need more fetishes in here since Bondage was in the first...
Makes me think of Crowley and how he tries to... 'incept' fetishes in us with his stories.
I just do wonder though, is Pinkie actually fertile? If she is, then things can take quite a big turn. Let's just hope she doesn't get lost in that cloud of lust up there where she kidnaps all her five friends and have an orgy.
Wait... I'd better stop before a list of fetishes pop up in my comment
4135503 I'm sure I will.
4136552 is futa not enough? ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED?!
Source for D picture?
4138009
Heh, double D picture more like it.
For my edited version, just click the pic at the top; it's the only place you'll find it online.
For the original (deemed NSFW by fimfic mods, mind you): http://derpibooru.org/173040.
4137781
I'm sure he is. Some people are just shy.
4136942
She'll get more. Just wait until the last chapter.
Well, to tell without giving too much away, expect one ATM scene and one dirty talker. I'll let you guess which is which. Not to mention the last chapter which is just...
I'll cover that in the last chapter, but no, she's not.
... kind of the other way around, actually.
Heh, well, this fic isn't meant to be a showcase of different fetishes. I wanted it to be a showcase of each of the mane 6's bodies, personalities, and sexual style. I tried very hard to make sure each chapter was a new and unique experience.
4136552
I'm going to go ahead and assume you're wavering between 'turned on' and 'orgasmic'.
4135063 You are not alone. I just read them for the socializing
*insert forever alone meme here*
4135063 Seemingly, yes.
...
4133472
No. Just...no.
I have the wearedest bonner right now
why is it in so many stories like this Twilight is portrayed as either a complete virgin or close to it in this case concerning males, some even have her not knowing how sex works, and nearly all have her as the petite school girl, which would be fine on the earlier versions of Twilight but she's an alicorn she grows, why not play with that a little why not have her fill out some more, I never understood why so many people don't want to do anything with the changes she goes through or have her act like an adult that can talk about sex in a mature manner, at least here she's shown to be open to new things, I guess im just getting tired of seeing her portrayed the same way over and over, still over all this is a fun story.