4138433 Oh, well I prefer 'Futaloo' If there's any difference. ^.^ In fact, I might have to write a story about that, just because of how fun it is to say.
Dumbstruck, seriously. That was a pretty hot little exhibition/stripdance she did for Pinkie. Dunno why, but I've always had a thing for that. Carry on, my wayward author!
4138452 Hey, if you do write futaloo, could you make it DinkyLoo?
Also, very good chapter, very good story, but you have several things that people don't usually like, like Anthro and Futa, that may contribute to why people aren't liking this.
Catching Pinkie by surprise, Fluttershy grabbed her and pulled her down on the bed on top of her.
Pinkie stared down into Fluttershy's face, feeling her stiff rod pressing against Fluttershy's soft belly. Her tits pushed down into Fluttershy's bigger and softer bosom.
Wait... WHEN did they suddenly switch positions?
She Pulled pinkie down
You done borked a slight capitalisation.
They say bigger boobs equals to a more motherly representation... I don't know where I'm going with this.
And dang is part of my hopes were dashed where Pinkie would be shipped with them all. Kinda
I'm one of those people who read clopfics just because it's fun. But this story, this story is fucking brilliant! Few clopfics get this much approval from me so congrats ;D
4138819 OF COURSE! IT ALL MAKES SENSE! Think, Zecora always rhymes and she gave Pinkie the potion. So Zecora is creating this story. ILLUMINATI CONTIRMED! FOURTH WALL IS GOING DOWN, REPEAT, FOURTH WALL IS GOING DOWN! MAYDAY MAYDAY!
Hm... I do have a significant number of downvotes on this one -- more than my other clopfics.
I wish someone would tell me why.
Or is it just that some people are resentful of clopfics in the feature box?
4138179 Tanks.
4138179 D as in the
Always nice to see Fluttershy get some much needed loving. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
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I know. ^.^ That was my attempt at a terrible pun.
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Glad you liked it!
4138230 I got it. Sexy.
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Actually neither. I'm not entirely sure why.
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Huh... well, you've got a naked-looking anthro Scootaloo avatar, so it's not because you're adverse to anthro.
Well, if you can figure out what it is, I'd love to hear it. I'd definitely like to know why this fic isn't 'connecting' to part of my audience!
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It's futatauraloo~
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Oh, well I prefer 'Futaloo'
If there's any difference. ^.^ In fact, I might have to write a story about that, just because of how fun it is to say.
...Wow, Fluttershy.
Just. Wow.
Dumbstruck, seriously. That was a pretty hot little exhibition/stripdance she did for Pinkie. Dunno why, but I've always had a thing for that. Carry on, my wayward author!
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That would be it, I think.
Wait a second... Are you rhyming these chapter names?
That chapter title...
WATCH IT RIIIIIIISE UP!
Ah-ha! I came prepared...Wow, I cannot believe the ways that statement can be perceived...
4138819 Omigod, I just noticed that.
4138819 How did I not notice this!
4138452
Hey, if you do write futaloo, could you make it DinkyLoo?
Also, very good chapter, very good story, but you have several things that people don't usually like, like Anthro and Futa, that may contribute to why people aren't liking this.
4138819 WHOA!! I'm embarrassed I missed that.
no same to say i love this fic
but i really think there needs to be a chapter with more Butt-play
i j-j-just think thats what pinkies gonna do next
come-on give us a bit of,....plot
Yes!
Oh god damn it!
O well, this was pretty good too.
That was THE MOST ADORABLE clop scene that I've ever read.
Aww man, gotta clean my keyboard again. . .
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Glad you liked it. I had feared that this was my weakest chapter.
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I suppose.
*sigh*
No negative comments makes it hard to improve in the future, though.
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Heh, for everyone who hadn't noticed this so far, the chapter names also rhyme with the story title.
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lolwut?
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I guess. Dealing with a protective Derpy might make a good plot point.
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Heh, your request comes with fortuitous timing. You're going to like this next chapter.
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There's really enough non-sex interaction here that you'd want to read the story just for that?
This I doubt.
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Don't worry. You get your Rarity now.
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Ah, you must be a Fluttershy fan.
Well, grats Flutters, that little show of yours just gave me a lovley ladyboner. :3
Wait... WHEN did they suddenly switch positions?
You done borked a slight capitalisation.
They say bigger boobs equals to a more motherly representation... I don't know where I'm going with this.
And dang is part of my hopes were dashed where Pinkie would be shipped with them all. Kinda
I'm one of those people who read clopfics just because it's fun. But this story, this story is fucking brilliant! Few clopfics get this much approval from me so congrats ;D
4158214 same here
4138819 OF COURSE! IT ALL MAKES SENSE! Think, Zecora always rhymes and she gave Pinkie the potion. So Zecora is creating this story. ILLUMINATI CONTIRMED! FOURTH WALL IS GOING DOWN, REPEAT, FOURTH WALL IS GOING DOWN! MAYDAY MAYDAY!
I think this is my favorite chapter above all XD
Now that was a fun and adorable chapter, officially my favorite one so far!
Was not expecting that little strip dance from Fluttershy though.... Then again, this does happen from the ones we least expect.
Also, Pinkie Pie is right, Fluttershy is indeed quite an attractive mare, even more so the Rarity.