4142669 Omigod, I also noticed it rhymes with the famous James Doakes line! Just add, muthafucka behind every title in this story, it sounds hilarious. Watch; Pinkie Pie's Party Surprise, Muthafucka!!! Try this on for size, Muthafucka!!! Don't get it in your eyes, Muthafucka!!! Watch it rise, Muthafucka!!!
The doorbell's ringin', and look who came It's my old friend, the Reaper, and he's callin' my name But I'm a certified sociopath, and I'll do him the same Some people try to stop me, but I'll never be tame
4142703 / 4142704 We've got the songwriter, a rapper and I myself am a bit of a singer / rapper. If we get another guy, we could be The Black Eyed Peas!
Rarity is most generous, and experienced. Either Big Mac is a very happy stallion, or Spike is growing up nicely.
Of course, Pinkie being Pinkie, I wouldnt expect the potions to work correctly, so I hope Zecora had to spend an amazing amount of physical experiments to find that sweet spot between the tingle, and bursting the door off with the flood.
4143070 Heh, maybe I could do a prequel with Zecora... but futa-on-Zecora has kinda been overdone, I think. And I woudln't say Big Mac or Spike, but yes, Rarity strikes me as the type who's been around the block a few times, though she'd never admit it.
And I woudln't say Big Mac or Spike, but yes, Rarity strikes me as the type who's been around the block a few times, though she'd never admit it.
I wouldn't doubt it, but Rarity wouldn't go for just anyone. I'd assume that, over the years, her hunt for her Prince Charming has lead her to the doorstep of a few stallions, all gentlemen, but found that they just weren't right. The breakup would come swiftly and quietly from either party, and the two would communicate a while longer before the line was cut fully, and Rarity would begin her search anew.
She's the only pony amongst the whole group that I could see really not sticking to one pony for long, since she doesn't really exude this quality of needing someone. Rainbow just doesn't care, Twilight is more focused on her studies, Pinkie probably wouldn't wanta relationship because she's more focused on spreading happiness to everyone, rather than just one pony, and AJ's thinking about the farm more than the next generation. Fluttershy would probably stick to a stallion through thick and thin, though.
Indeed.
Hmmm... which do I like more, though? In-control Rainbow, or submissive Rainbow? It's difficult to choose!
I'll start with the simple part: I really enjoyed this! Fun, well-written, good characterization, and even rather a bit on the arousing side
The style of this story reminds me of Phil Foglio's Xxxenophile comics, and whether you've heard of them or not, believe me when I tell you that's very high praise from me. A feature of the stories in those is that the entities (it's xenophile, so there are quite a variety of non-human sentients in most of the stories) are having fun together. It's not a place for angst, lots of dark line-art, or sadness... unless those are part of why someone / somepony / something is about to have fun.
So... very much yay and very much liked and faved. Keep 'em cumming!
Oooooh yes! That was everything I'd hoped for and more, wonderful! When Rarity said this:
“It seems the rumors I've heard are true.”
I kinda expected this: : "Yep I have a cock!" : "No, not that, that you're running around without underwear! A lady really should have more dignity Pinkie!" Hehe.
4142669 Omigod, I also noticed it rhymes with the famous James Doakes line! Just add, muthafucka behind every title in this story, it sounds hilarious. Watch;
Pinkie Pie's Party Surprise, Muthafucka!!!
Try this on for size, Muthafucka!!!
Don't get it in your eyes, Muthafucka!!!
Watch it rise, Muthafucka!!!
4142669 It takes three tries, Muthafucka!!!
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I'm a born rapper.
The doorbell's ringin', and look who came
It's my old friend, the Reaper, and he's callin' my name
But I'm a certified sociopath, and I'll do him the same
Some people try to stop me, but I'll never be tame
(not really)
4142703 I can rap. Did you know that?
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We've got the songwriter, a rapper and I myself am a bit of a singer / rapper. If we get another guy, we could be The Black Eyed Peas!
4142721 Good to see you again, The Princess Rarity.
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I suspected so.
your fic has sucessful brought out my inner spy
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thank you
Well, that was entertaining! Four down, one to go... hoo boy, Rainbow's gonna be a hellion, I think. Should be very fun to read!
Yanno, I'm mainly going through this to find out about the bottles in the bush at the beginning...
Rarity is most generous, and experienced. Either Big Mac is a very happy stallion, or Spike is growing up nicely.
Of course, Pinkie being Pinkie, I wouldnt expect the potions to work correctly, so I hope Zecora had to spend an amazing amount of physical experiments to find that sweet spot between the tingle, and bursting the door off with the flood.
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I try.
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Indeed.
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This will become very relevant in the last chapter. ^.^
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Heh, maybe I could do a prequel with Zecora... but futa-on-Zecora has kinda been overdone, I think.
And I woudln't say Big Mac or Spike, but yes, Rarity strikes me as the type who's been around the block a few times, though she'd never admit it.
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I wouldn't doubt it, but Rarity wouldn't go for just anyone. I'd assume that, over the years, her hunt for her Prince Charming has lead her to the doorstep of a few stallions, all gentlemen, but found that they just weren't right. The breakup would come swiftly and quietly from either party, and the two would communicate a while longer before the line was cut fully, and Rarity would begin her search anew.
She's the only pony amongst the whole group that I could see really not sticking to one pony for long, since she doesn't really exude this quality of needing someone. Rainbow just doesn't care, Twilight is more focused on her studies, Pinkie probably wouldn't wanta relationship because she's more focused on spreading happiness to everyone, rather than just one pony, and AJ's thinking about the farm more than the next generation. Fluttershy would probably stick to a stallion through thick and thin, though.
Hmmm... which do I like more, though? In-control Rainbow, or submissive Rainbow? It's difficult to choose!
I'll start with the simple part: I really enjoyed this! Fun, well-written, good characterization, and even rather a bit on the arousing side
The style of this story reminds me of Phil Foglio's Xxxenophile comics, and whether you've heard of them or not, believe me when I tell you that's very high praise from me. A feature of the stories in those is that the entities (it's xenophile, so there are quite a variety of non-human sentients in most of the stories) are having fun together. It's not a place for angst, lots of dark line-art, or sadness... unless those are part of why someone / somepony / something is about to have fun.
So... very much yay and very much liked and faved. Keep 'em cumming!
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
Again, I came prepared. (Godamn it, if there's a way to say that without it sounding sexual, please let me know )
4143756 there is not. Sorry, bro.
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Oh, well...
4142669 I was talking about the comments.
4142669 SAAYYY WHHAAAAT!? I just noticed it after you said it!
Oooooh yes! That was everything I'd hoped for and more, wonderful!
When Rarity said this:
I kinda expected this:
: "Yep I have a cock!"
: "No, not that, that you're running around without underwear! A lady really should have more dignity Pinkie!"
Hehe.
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I'll have to check out that comic series.
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No, there's no way.
Not when you're bragging about a non-sticky keyboard!
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The positions thing, I don't think there's any problem with.
But the capitalization...
I thought I fixed that!
*goes off to revise again*
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Oh.
That makes more sense.
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My rhymes blow yo mind.
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That would be perfect! A shame I didn't think of it.
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4142824 surprise... BUTTSECKS!!!!!
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So that this comments section may be forever blessed with the art that is this video
Well that was quite the sex shower scene.