• Member Since 22nd Nov, 2012
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DijoCurry


i'm just starting off, i'm not to good at writing but i want to be. any helpful pointers would be welcome.

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Luna tries her best to make breakfast for somepony special however having other ponies cooking for her all the time has left her with no culinary skills at all. With some help Luna attempts to finish in time before her stallion wakes.

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It was rather cute. Some spelling errors but over all it was a nice story.

3954493 Thank you and sorry for the mistakes, i'm glad they were not bad enough to ruin the story for you.

3980163 Thank you :twilightblush: I'm glad you enjoyed.

3980186 enjoy is such a weak and over used word. I Absolutely Loved It!!!! :D :heart:

3980190 I'm delighted to hear. :3 Thank you for giving the short story a shot.

3980209 You Welcome :rarity starry: now make it longer :raritywink:

3980268 Well this was a valentines (or hearts and hooves) thing only and not canon to Luna and Cielo's relationship. However they do have a blooming relationship in my stories starting in Cielo's Secret then on to A Night To Remember and finally the newest one i'm working on The Journey Begins. If you're interested that is.

3980313 Then by all means head on over to my page. I hope you find everything as enjoyable as this little fic.

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