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Royal Afillyation (Book 2)

The alicorn from my previous story continues his adventure by telling Princess Celestia of how his journey progressed. More of his mysterious past is relieved.

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SkyStream #1 · Feb 20th, 2014 · · ·

hum.... wut? What happened in this story, I tried reading this first chapter but.... I couldn't understand anything.... And not because it was poorly written, no, the writing and all was nice but.... context? character presentation? those seemed to be I dunno.... NON-EXISTENT. Even if you're planning on giving us the previous story and all over the course of the next chapters, we NEED some basic information. Like: who is Midnight Galaxy (character), why does he know Twilight, who is Callie, why Midnight knows Discord from apparently somewhere else than Equestria and so many other small things. But many minor details piling up makes for one huge mess. At least, you don't need a translator to read it....

Comment posted by Midnight Galaxy deleted Feb 21st, 2014

Midnight Galaxy