Windshear is a retired Royal Guard who's lost sight of what he wanted in life. One day his life is turned upside down after being drafted into the service of Princess Luna who orders him to travel to a distant land and recover a stolen book filled with potentially dangerous magical knowledge not meant for the wrong hooves.
Windshear travels with his closest friend Octavia who serves as his moral compass, and eagerly seeks musical inspiration from different cultures. Also his unlikely ally Trixie who's quick to jump at any opportunity to find power, fame, and fortune. Along the way they will make new friends, and dangerous enemies.
Chapters (3)
I like it and I'm interested to see what happens next. There were a few noticeable changes of tense - particularly near the beginning - that you might want to clean up. That said, I still understood the story perfectly so I guess it's not such a big deal.
I'll be tracking, have fun!
356465 Thanks for pointing that out. I'll do a revision when I get some time. Self editing isn't an easy feat to accomplish.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
"The rum is gone!"
I can't wait to see more of this guy! Looking forward to the next chapter.
389807 Yeah, don't you just hate it when the rum is gone? Jack Sparrow references always offer a good laugh! ^^ I've got loads of comedy lined up for the next chapter before things get serious again.