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Queen Chrysalis Devours Your Flesh

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This is a second person story featuring changelings, yourself (as a Pegasus) dancing, singing, and the consumption of (your) flesh. Bon appetite!

Co-written with hell00001

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Magnum the Critic

Magnum the Critic #1 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · ·

I hope you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing it.

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Nharctic

Nharctic #2 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

The hell did I just read?

lordofmyth

lordofmyth #3 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

............ changelings don't eat ponies. they feed on love and magic. if they eat the ponies, they cannot extract love and magic cause they are dead.

Magnum the Critic

Magnum the Critic #4 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 4 · 5 ·

3947124 shut up and enjoy the story

DominiusTWD

DominiusTWD #5 · Feb 15th, 2014 · · ·

that was..... strange .....

jmj

jmj #6 · Feb 17th, 2014 · · ·

Strange, Not bad at all, just kind of strange. Second person is a very awkward style. It's kind of like being paralyzed on a roller-coaster. Forced to watch what goes on around you while you cannot do anything to escape. I think it may have been stronger if it were written in a first person perspective of another character so we could experience their thoughts and match it to our own as opposed to being told what we feel, do, and think. But, like a roller-coaster, it was still a cool ride.

Magnum the Critic