I'm a writer and artist. I just recently got a new computer, so I'm going to get back to writing ASAP
This is the heart-wrenching tale of Zerus, the young unicorn pupil of Princess Luna. From his rise from humble beginnings to his tragic disappearance at the Crystal Empire, this is the account of the little colt so few of Canterlot know ever existed. OC alert. Tie-in to my other alternate universe stories, Forever and For Always and The Reign of Princess Twilight Sparkle. Comments are encouraged.
In loving memory of Tiffany "Kiki" Havivy
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Should be Your.
Anyway, this had been kind of interesting, didn't expect Starswirl the Bearded to rule Canterlot, nor Sombra to be a pirate. Arr!
Another thing, you started this fic before season four aired, okay.
In that case I suspect you to be a slow writer. No offence, for I am kind of one too. But what I'm trying to say is; don't bite more than you can chew.
The Alternate Universe tag makes mentioning this obsolete, actually.
Please forgive me if I sound rude in any way, I would like people to comment to me in this way.
Nonetheless, this was pretty good, and I hope to see more soon.
~RuD
Many thanks for the critique. I hope to continue soon.