Sunset Shimmer struggles to embrace her new relationship with Twilight Sparkle. And learns there is more to friendship - and love - than being nice to somepony you like.
Really great story so far, loving the characterization you've got here for everyone. I'm holding out hope that both Dash and Flutters are switches and Fluttershy has a dominate streak she keeps well in control. We've seen it in the show! Mare can put her hoof down when she needs to.
On another, minor, note the doll from the show was actually called Miss Smarty Pants, not Mr. I really like her mane!
I really like your characterization of Sunset Shimmer. Also, I have to say that the scene between Sunset and Celestia has been my favorite part so far. Keep up the great work!
Goddamn.
Sunset certainly slipped into that quick!
Plus a contract? So, she's a slave now.
First, the former student... Then... The Crystal Empire... Then...
THE WORLD.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I'm not into this fetish but this is too cute.
Dis is good. I give you five outta five
3838473 Don't forget the Plot. You always go for the Plot.
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That was a given.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3838785 Wrong plot.
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Both work in this.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3838802 Fuck, I hate when people use my logic against me...
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Mwa haha...
~Skeeter The Lurker
3838866 AKU! USE YOUR LAUGH LIKE YOU MEAN IT!
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~Skeeter The Lurker
Loving it!
Great i'm loving this keep more cumming~
Dawwwww so cute
Really great story so far, loving the characterization you've got here for everyone. I'm holding out hope that both Dash and Flutters are switches and Fluttershy has a dominate streak she keeps well in control. We've seen it in the show! Mare can put her hoof down when she needs to.
On another, minor, note the doll from the show was actually called Miss Smarty Pants, not Mr. I really like her mane!
Oh this was a really good one, at least Twilight agreed to try it for 3 months and hopefully they stick together
I really like your characterization of Sunset Shimmer. Also, I have to say that the scene between Sunset and Celestia has been my favorite part so far. Keep up the great work!
normaly im not into the whole sub dom thing...but i love this so far so ill give it a go
All I need now to make my day complete is for (at some point) Sunset to walk around Ponyville with a collar. Because this story can only get better.
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You wouldn't happen to be thinking of the series Affliction of the Heart, would you?
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Could be, but contracts are not unheard of in standard D and s relationships. Granted standard is a bit vague.
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... and now I can't stop thinking about Kuno and Sunset getting freaky with each other
How would Twilight know this?
3838904 Skeeter, this is why you're a badass. xD
I'm not usually into bdsm all that much, but I love the story progression, and this is just hot!
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Watches video
I'm not going to laugh for a week...
I dont normaly read this type of clop but when i do i read the good shit...and this is the good shit now im off to steal souls:stache:
Que Rocky theme.
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Wow, you turned Sunset Shimmer into a really complex and deep character that I like a lot. Now I kinda feel bad about killing her.
SOMEONE PUT THIS IN THE PET PLAY GROUP
3838787 Wow.
3849755 Neither can I now
... Did I miss something regarding the dynamics in Pinkie's and Twilight's relationship?
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