Sylva and BloodQuill have come to Ponyville to move in with her cousin, Twilight Sparkle, for a change from Canterlot, but moving to a new town with new ponies with strange personalities can be hard to cope with. When BloodQuill has trouble settling in, help might come from in most unexpected form. When a crisis comes along and the elements are needed, Twilight is captured and it's down to her inexperienced cousin to save the day.
Hmm. Not bad. Tracking.
EDIT: Now that I actually read it, it is very good =D
not as bad as i thought it would be.
i was expecting a mary-sue twilight clone.
you have some spelling errors, notably
"BloodQuill new Spike"
and you need to put an indentation at the beginning of paragraphs
Seems interesting, compared to what I originally thought was a mary-sue Twilight.
Tracked.
375368 yes I made the brilliant mistake of not revising it at all before I published it...
Haha everyone was expecting Mary-Sue Twilight clones DUDE seriously though you're doing pretty good.
(BTW this is Inky why are you not watching me yet XD)
390446 Ink, why are you calling yourself chickenscratch..? haha thanks
390488 Ink Swirl is already taken, and Chickenscratch is a cool name. Don't hate
I'm sure it is
Blood Quill WHERE IS THE REST WHERE.
so what happened to the rest of the chapter?
524409 Who knows I'll try to get her to fix that today.
I'm sooooorry guys I have a huge school thing D:
Oops my computer was being weird so instead of typing soon it said oon and saved it :/
Ok FINALLY it's short but it's a chapter! I promise I'll make a long one next time ok?