Delta Squad Record A-65

by Zyggy

Short Chapter 1: Ninja'd

“Let’s move.”
“My pleasure, my simple minded friend.”

We entered silently, and Doe snuck up behind one of the few guards with his machete.
The last thing the guard saw was a hand, a blade, and blood everywhere.
Doe allowed the corpse to silently hit the ground.
I went on ahead and got my shotgun ready.
A sorry bastard turned the corner, and next thing I saw of his head were small ribbons of flesh and hair.
The base went on alert.

-Swap to Doa-

Almost all who were able were at Ponyville, and most were on the side with the Everfree Forest.
Shy was forced to abandon her cottage, and fortunately she managed to get all her animals out of there.
I was setting up my mini-gun for standard use, on a barricade made of metal, when several humans came out of the forest.
I identified their armor instantly.
The baggy, metal pated, blue and red colored uniform of Oceania base Terrorists.
They all had weapons, and they were out, ready to shoot at us.
“I need more time!”
The bullets flew in both directions, the blasts from the firing echoing.
I was nearly hit twice, but managed to set up the gun and it instantly had a soldier on it.
I rushed over into a small house and grabbed my Electron Launcher.
I charged it up and left through the door again, then fired.
The damage was immense, frying everything in a straight, two feet wide line.
Then a bullet impacted with my helmet, and everything went dark.

-DOS-

The world’s magic was going insane, blinding me in a flurry of colors.
Fortunately I was able to take cover behind a large fallen chimney.
“WOULD YOU STOP?”
The color shifts calmed down only slightly.
Still too much.
I was effectively out for the fight.

-Doe-

My machete was in the skull of a hostile ten yards away, and I had already my pistol out and two hostiles down with one shot.
Aigi was behind me with his ‘Flying Fists of Fury’, his weapons having been shot out of his hands.
I didn’t even need to look to know blood was everywhere.
Six more shots, ten hostiles down.
Reload.
Eight shots, five hostiles.
Reload.
Eight shots, twelve down.
Reload.
One shot.
Ten down.
“BOOM MOTHERFUCKERS!”
One shot.
Both of us were down.
One blast of lighting.
We were up and every one of those bastards died.

We checked our wounds as Blitz slowly glided down from the sky.
“Thanks for the assist.”
“Don’t mention it Doe.”
Her attention turned to Aigi’s more serious wounds.
“I’m fine… Just…”
He fell over and passed out from the pain.
Blitz and I shared his weight as we carried him back to Ponyville.

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I sat at my table, wearing the pony suit I got.
I painted it with pink decals, and changed the visor color to pink.
My .44 magnum was in my hand, bullets in my belt.
My hacksaw was at my side, ready to be drawn for a melee.
It was time.
“Matthew Davis, please guide me for what I will do, in your name I go to fight. In your name I go with your blessing.”
I was then gone from there.

Comments

17486 I found my new background today!

This story made my brain hurt... You don't just write like that!

[Zyggy]

26944
And?

And I also couldn't tell who was talking, so I just made up a character named "Jofro" and pretended he was just crazy and talking to himself :derpytongue1:

Derby tongue 1 doesn't work anymore :(

looking back at the comments you have a bad attitude

[Zyggy]

26958
If you are talking about me (Most likely) it is due to a very, very stressful life.
In the past years my aggression has gone up drastically.
In the end it can all be summarized by this...

[Half_A_Taco]

26958 LOL I bet you feel pretty bad right now!

Good fic, comrade. 4 stars, but I fear others might not like it and your writing style!

I cannot tell if I like this, the writing style is atrocious. There is an accepted and expected writing technique that is certainly not in use here. Sorry, have to rate it very low for its lack of readability.

[Zyggy]

27257
okay.
/shrug

[Zyggy]

eh...
this isn't the route I want for this story anymore...
I have a much better idea, one that I can work with properly.
So, this is cancelled.
DOS stays in the story though, so ha.
Don't finish what you can't start.