• Member Since 13th Oct, 2011
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Zyggy


Just a writer who hates their writing style but does it anyways.

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Human turned into pony and sent to Equestria in a time about two generations after the current Mane six and must deal with it and his terrible luck. Also, Celestia effectively hates this human.
And he wants revenge.
And is a misanthrope.
And obsessed with silverware.
He can't understand any of these crazy ponies either.
(It seems the Genre of the story keeps on shifting, must note this.)

Chapters (27)
Comments ( 128 )

THIS SOUNDS LIKE THE BEST STORY EVER, your description and my expectations better exeed

ahhaha the fuck, this is a cluster-fuck of problems and insanity in the form of a muffin baked in HELL, MADE ONLY WITH FRESHERSHEST OF THE SOULS OF DEAD FETUSES AND WITH THE MOST MOIST OF MASHED PHALLUSES. either way i still dont understand

Don't know what the fuck is going on half the time but please keep this going.....please you'll get a muffin...with chocolate chips...and a fork.:pinkiecrazy:

“I’m gonna be the most relentless bastard this world has ever met.”

Don't disappoint me.:pinkiecrazy:

Meet The Medic Reference? HELL YEAH!!

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Why yes!
Finally that was caught!

I Don't Know Why But I Wanna Say...

MORTAL KOMBAT!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

Its very chaotic, hard to read and understand :derpyderp2:

Still enjoying the insanity!:pinkiecrazy:

Soon The Truth Will Be Revealed,And Dear God I Can't Wait:pinkiehappy:

Ok....
Very few mistakes...
Not a bad plot...
Although I must ask, why did you change their names and cutie marks?:rainbowhuh:

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I didn't.
Two or three generations from now, meaning about 120+ years later.

Knifer- "knifyknifyknifeyknife"
*celestia walks in
Celestai- :pinkiegasp: "WHAT ARE YOU DOING DO MY SISTER!?!"
Knifer-"knifyknifyknife"
Celestia-"o_O"

-:trollestia:

I spotted 3 reference one from Zelda one from tf2 and one from cupcakes

It's simple and easy to read.

I must say I love it.:heart::heart::heart::heart:

By god, he can whine like Rarity, and he never even knew she existed, maybe she is helping him from beyond the grave. :pinkiecrazy:

She nudged me with her nose.
I refused to move.
Her horn glowed.
I refused to move.
I burst into flames.
I refused to move.

Wow, he REALLY doesn't want to move! :pinkiecrazy:

Fable is a very self centerd pony. :moustache:
I like the story so far

WTF IS THIS?!? ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)

you lost me in the middle to complex and throws off the readers attention

I'm sorry.
The name change was completely unnecessary. Either you change it back, or you lose your audience completely.
That simply ruins the story. It could have so much potential, but nope, you troll us.

Necromancy!!!!:flutterrage:

Still so awesome that its retarded.:rainbowkiss:

Love the story now a favorite

Okay, yes I gone overboard with the last comment.
It just throws me off very badly when you change the names.
If you have to, at least post a good reason for it.

26378
The only name change was a chapter change to fix a typo.

Ahhh cripe...
I am an idiot...
I'll post this for future reference.
Summary for the story gents.

"Human turned into pony and sent to Equestria in a time about two generations after the current Mane six and must deal with it and his terrible luck. Also, Celestia effectively hates this human.
And he wants revenge.
And is a misanthrope.
And obsessed with silverware.
He can't understand any of these crazy ponies either.
(It seems the Genre of the story keeps on shifting, must note this."

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everyone Fs up from time to time, don't worry.

How can you hate your writing style? This was bloody hilarious!

This just made my day. I honestly couldn't stop laughing from just how wierd it was.

Finally gosh unless this is one of his dreams then ...

"I smiled back at her.
“I am not bound to your orders Princess. YOU FUCK WITH ME AND I FUCK YOU OVER!”
I did a back flip out the window, and landed in the bushes."

Thats how he rule! Killin' goddesses and backflipin' out the windows.

killed a goddess, backflipped out the window. made of boss and win.

I dis like the hate this fic is getting because certant people don't like the fact that clestia was killed.
Before last chapter it was a 4.5 star story but now it's 2.1 like WTF people these days really don't like creativity.

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In order to be liked and noticed nowadays, one must first remember to do the same boring stuff everyone else does.
Only when you have many many followers can you be creative and do whatever you want.
Why can't we be more like the Renaissance Era?

The only happy ending is an awkard ending.

...

Approval:moustache:

It's good I guess the last ending is good ending the first is the neutral ending and second is bad ending

Please note evryone
Not yet done
Those are just possible endings that could have occurred...

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