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Everything is all fine and dandy for Twilight Sparkle, her being a princess and all that.
But did you wonder how her friends actually feel?
Of course, they didn't know what would happen if they let their jealousy get the better of them.
Untagged characters: Princess Luna and Shining Armour
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Might I humbly suggest that you get an editor, because THAT COVER ART demands that all words associated with it be of the highest caliber. It's an interesting concept, it could just use some polish.
And did I mention DAT COVER ART?
Hey this is great even if a few words are misspelled.:yay keep up the great story
3716544 Thanks for the advice
I'm just not sure how to exactly get an editor
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I only just noticed that the end of this chapter was quite a bit like the one where Valkyrie let Darquesse take over for good in Skulduggery Pleasant.....
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Wow this is so good
I don't think anyone's confused by it yet, but the time leaps are a little random, so I thought I'd tidy it up a bit.
It is Twilight's FIRST anniversary, even though she's been on the throne for THREE years because Cadance took over for TWO.
This is 'some 100 years later' because Celestia and Luna didn't dissapear immedialtely. They ruled for some time after that.
That certaintly helped my brain.
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My spelling was terrible there.
Oh my. Something tells me that this isn't going to end well.
But I do like the story.
And like Fluttershy said.
Rainbow Dash is going to be very hard to corrupt.
I like how this is going.
This is going to get rough and tough.
Oh boy. This isn't going to end well. Great chapter.
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Thank you!
And yes, I have a feeling it isn't...
Oh my. Is there going to be a squeal?
Ikr
Wait that was the end. Is there going to be a sequel or is that it? There needs to be more.
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Maybe...maybe.
You'll just have to hope, right?
4197226 Yes. I can hope for it
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"Just hope, and things may turn out right. Remember that."- Princess Celestia
I actually have had something planned for a while, and I would like cover art for it but I'm not that much of an artist. I am going to start writing it soon and it will probably be a one - shot, but that's really all the news I have right now on the matter.
Who am I kidding? There is certaintly going to be more!
4202315 :D yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!
"Subby" sounds like Rarity.