Discover the true purpose of the castle of Canterlot.
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... Seems to be trauma for the sake of trauma. No thank you.
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Thanks for your comment.
I tried to imagine what the three pony tribes were like the earlier days and put them in a lawless Equestria. The reason for the lack of character 'deepness' was to avoid the 'trauma', as you said.
A bit too dark? Yes, can't deny it.
Aside the story, what do you think about the writing style? As the grammar and its rules goes.
Well worth the read, I won't go into detail as to avoid spoilers for future readers.