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The World Will Move on Without Me

After the passing of his wife. Bold Text has decided to spend what little time he has living a peaceful and secluded life. His life takes a change when an odd stroke of luck gives him the one thing he never had: a child, six in fact. He takes care of the children until their families arrive but things complicate when one's family never comes.

A first person narrative with little dialogue. Cover art welcome.

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YB #1 · Dec 18th, 2013 · · ·

Line breaks are your friends! This wall of text is frightening and it makes it hard to get into the story D:

Otherwise, it serves its purposes, feels are there. Character development was not bad. I'd like to say more but I don't have enough time to review it entirely, barely enough to end it. I might come back later.

Anyway, here's my upvote, take it as an encouragement.