Diamond Tiara has bullied the CMC for years. But what happens when she realizes that what she did was wrong? She goes on an adventure to the Crystal Empire with a few unlikely partners. Eventually, something goes terribly wrong (as it does in every story like this) and she learns more about the truth about her life.
Twists and turns in litterally every chapter! Also some mixture of sad and comedy, but I can't tag that for some reason. I will add more character tags as the story goes on.
This is a good start, but there are a few problems.
As far as my grammar knowledge goes, you aren't so bad in that department.
Do you have spell check? Becouse that would help you a lot.
no... I'm Spell check-less... I'm in the middle of some legal issues so I can't do this too often