Sweetie Belle has been married for five years and has a daughter of seven. Her Husband, Lucky Charme, isn't the most normal, seeing as to how he needs love to survive.
When their daughter, Sweet Melody, asks how they met, and why she can't go to school, Lucky divulges the whole story.
Just letting you know- you have a typo in the short description. You wrote "abd" instead of "and".
Also, thumbs up so far for the idea :)
Edit: Never mind, you fixed it. I think.
Yeah, I noticed that. Thanks though. I am pretty good at editing. I've edited long before I started writing
Thank you for writing this.
2812390 you are very welcome.
amazing idea my friend.
2812562 thank you.
this is happening?
this is so nervexciting
2814707 yes it is happening. I will change the perspective to Sweetie Belle every other chapter, so look forward to it.
Well, this is a promising start. There is a bit of a spacing issue between the paragraphs at the beginning. I look forward to seeing how this story will develop.
Thanks for writing.
2842671 and develop it will. I am going to start working on chapter 2 today. It will be in Sweetie Belle's perspective
so that who was by the queen
2998541 eeyup... Just wait untill you see what happens next
2811501 thanks for telling me that. Sorry it took so long, I completely forgot about your comment.
oooooooooooooooo interesting
3365345 thanks man. took me forever to finish that chapter it was exausting
3365986
your welcome bro. lol