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Goodbye1234567890


I am no longer a brony, but I'll continue writing for this website, not for the topic, but because I like to write. My name is Clifford Anthony-Michael Eliseuson.

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Sweetie Belle has been married for five years and has a daughter of seven. Her Husband, Lucky Charme, isn't the most normal, seeing as to how he needs love to survive.

When their daughter, Sweet Melody, asks how they met, and why she can't go to school, Lucky divulges the whole story.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 16 )

Just letting you know- you have a typo in the short description. You wrote "abd" instead of "and".
Also, thumbs up so far for the idea :)

Edit: Never mind, you fixed it. I think.

Yeah, I noticed that. Thanks though. I am pretty good at editing. I've edited long before I started writing

Thank you for writing this.

amazing idea my friend.

:pinkiegasp: this is happening?
:pinkiehappy: this is so nervexciting

2814707 yes it is happening. I will change the perspective to Sweetie Belle every other chapter, so look forward to it.:twilightsmile:

Well, this is a promising start. There is a bit of a spacing issue between the paragraphs at the beginning. I look forward to seeing how this story will develop.

Thanks for writing.

2842671 and develop it will. I am going to start working on chapter 2 today. It will be in Sweetie Belle's perspective

so that who was by the queen:twilightblush::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

2998541 eeyup... Just wait untill you see what happens next :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

2811501 thanks for telling me that. Sorry it took so long, I completely forgot about your comment.

oooooooooooooooo interesting

3365345 thanks man. took me forever to finish that chapter it was exausting:rainbowwild:

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