• Published 25th Dec 2013
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Something Missing - spacecardswell



Braeburn and Soarin have tried to spice up their relationship, and after an odd discovery Braeburn thinks he knows how to

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A Bed

Braeburn led Soarin to their shared bedroom, and Braeburn grabbed a changing mat and set it on the bed.

He gave it a welcoming pat. "Hop up"

Soarin walked over and jumped up on the mat, looking up at his now caretaker Braeburn. Thoughts came into his head of all the things Braeburn could do to him, but he tried not to think about them. Baeburn saw that Soarin would not look at him, and wanted to change that. He reached out form under a blanket on the bed and brought out the pacifier with straps on it, and inserted it into Soarins mouth. Soarin, not paying attention, thought it was a normal pacifier, but felt the straps being attached behind his head. A intense blush filled his cheeks as the pacifier was fully attached.

Braeburn then grabed the blindfold that he used earlier on Soarin, and slipped it back on his head. Soarin was cut of from the light, and now was at the complete mercy of Braeburn. This sent chills racing through his body, and ending at the member in his diaper, which was starting to react to the new situation.

This twitch was noticed by Braeburn, and he knew that he could go on. Braeburn set his hoof on the diaper front, and gave it a small push, feeling the warmth that came off it, and the surprise hidden with in it. Soarin gave a quiet moan, mostly silenced by his pacifier, and arched his hard back, feeling the ruch of lust hit him.

Braeburn started rubbing a little faster and Soarin kept moaning louder and more violently. Braeburn was enjoying seeing his partner be so happy, and he couuld feel him becoming very happy under the diaper, but the farmpony wanted something out of the deal. The brown pony leaned forward, and started kissing the pacifier that blocked him ofrm Soarins mouth. The pegusus felt the kiss and tried to kiss back, pushing as hard as Braeburn.

The two kissed each other for what felt like forever until Braeburn got an idea. H e looped his tounge around the ring of the pacifer, and slowly pulling Soarin with him by his pacifer leaned him up and continued their kiss, and Braeburn doubled his efforts in rubbing his mates diaper front.

The moaning became louder and more spuratic as Soarin was getting more exited. Braeburn kept going, seeing his partner close to the edge. Soarin was getting hit with so many emotions, but he dismised them all for the one currently filling his mind, lust.

Soarin gave one last loud moan and the front of his diaper was coated in his seed. He sighed, glad that he finished, and laid his head down on his pillow. Braeburn quickly joined him and wrapped his arms around him, and removed the blindfold, but left the pacifier in. Soarin blinked a few times, his eyes used to the dark, and looked over at his mate next to him, and lightly kissed his head.

"Thanks"

The earth pony smiled, and sat up, looking to his partner. "You could continue living like this, if you wanted. Would you like that?"

His pegusus friend looked up at him, and witeh a smile hidden by a pacifer nodded and snuggled closer to the warm body next to him.

They both cuddled up and fell asleep in the others arms.

Author's Note:

And its over, hope you folks enjoyed it. criticism and help is alwyas liked.

Comments ( 10 )

This was adorable, I wished their was more. Also, what was Braebuen's secret?

3681931 That my dear man was a small nod to a posible sequal.

The author's notes at the end of each chapter about how cute Soarin' was are very jarring. You don't need to say that. There are also quite a few errors in terms of grammar and other aspects which really detracted from the story. If you can't write without error, get an editor. Final point is that you remember the old adage, "Show, don't tell." You're doing far too much telling.

This was the first adult foal story I read where it was a colt, nice change of pace.:twilightsmile:

3688418 Thank you for the points I need to work on, and I am glad you decided to help with my story. I will try to fix some of those mistakes.

3692456 I made it because I was sick of seeing f/f or f/m. So yeah change of pace.

So, you're just gonna leave the "soiled" nappy on Soarin.....

:facehoof:

3830987 I know its not hygenic, but its punishment (reward) for Soarin, so yes I am.

3831530 Well, I dont know how in Celestia's name how "what happened in the nappy'' was a reward, but so long as it is changed the next day, i am fine with it.

As soon as his head pooped out

Braeburn wins, decapitation

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