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The Sky

This is just a short story of a humble weather pegasus enjoying the sky. (read in 1st person)

I like to think this takes place during the "Read It and Weep" episode when Rainbow Dash hurt her wing and was in the hospital for a few days,but that's just me.

I wrote this at 11:00 last night,there shouldn't be any errors since I've proofread it,but if there is,I apologize.

I put both the "OC" and "Other" character tags because I'm not sure what to put in this instance since the pony could be ether,it just depends on what the reader wants it to be since it's in 1st person.

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Steampunk Starlight

Steampunk Starlight #1 · Mar 12th, 2012 · · ·

That was bittersweet. The fancy description is not bad. You have a lot of imagination on clouds.
It's much more poetic than a actual story. A bit boring personally.

EpicAeromancer33

EpicAeromancer33 #2 · Mar 12th, 2012 · · ·

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"You have a lot of imagination on clouds."

Yea,I love the sky.

Anything I can do to make it not boring?

Steampunk Starlight

Steampunk Starlight #3 · Mar 12th, 2012 · · ·

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What about the sky interpretation? Example, seeing skies invoked certain memories of events. Personal thoughts and all that. Maybe she remembered a certain event or something of that scale. I wish my description was as vivid as yours; but describing things is always a weakness for me. Sorry if I'm not a good critic.