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Mild magical mind control, Mild Dominance/Submission, Body alternation

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Edit: its funny, people down vote someone else's opinion

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No brakes.

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Some special in mind you would recommend?

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Thank you for your honest oppinion.

wing boner

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Well, my job is done then.

...amazing..how do I like this! For a first story it was somehow interesting
Lol I cracked up when flutter shy said take this bitch

X D lol molestia at it again

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Thank you kindly. I aim to please.
Good to hear, it just seemed to... fit in that moment.

What gave you that impression?

4158801 Good thought. The spell actually had a matrix that is closed in itself. Once active, it has only a certain ammount of ernegy before running out of proverbial juice and undoing itself. Once it is on and running, there are no means for spells on the same thaumaturgical level or below to elongate its duration. Only higher tier magic would do be able to do that. Call it a precaution.

4160448 My pleasure. Do send me a pidgeon when you got an answer yes? Oh, and a letter with the answer of course, the pidgon will be just a light snack.^^

I wish you would link the pic you used as inspiration )
http://cauldroneer.tumblr.com/post/53998992152/heres-a-thing-somewhere-between-the-multiple
http://derpiboo.ru/362059

4169476 Ha, thanks a buch. I was looking everywhere to find that link & picture but I simply could not. Vielen, vielen Dank!

Edit: Kay, scratch that. Cant use it but still thank you.^^

This was... acceptable to my tastes. Nice one

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Woah nelly, never thought this here will still pop up on someone radar.^^ Still, thank you.`s one of my first stories ever, so I think I came along a bit since then.