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Seeing as this is your first clopfic, it was pretty good. I will follow and favorite for new updates to see how good it gets from here.
Why the flying fuck did I just read.
Also what's this malarkey about Luna having a twelve foot dick? You do know how big that is right?
12 foot dick? Damn, dude. That thing wouldn't have been able to have any sort of blood flow at all. I know Luna is an alicorn and all, but I think even she would have passed out from her body trying to fill that thing up.
Don't worry about it, dude. It's your first clop. I haven't even written a clop before, so I'm not the one to consult on this.
4578085 well it was a dream
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I understand that, dude. I didn't mean anything by it either. I just found it funny. I still chuckle when I read that
King- I said you can suck my dick
Kennedy- I do not understand
King- we do not support masturbation
Kennedy- well ain't that nice
WAT
4578085 Yes this was one of my conflicts, I get all my ideas after reading a lot of clopfics sometimes but trust me some people are just crazy when it comes to long dicks
In the future I will probably edit the length but trust me, have read a fic with a 20 feet dick 
4578042 Thanks! Though it is a clopfic I am going to include more story in this, only so much clop I can handle writing at a time
The rificulousness is entertaining.
4579050 Uh, thanks?
4578070 Yeah this is a problem that will soon be edited out, As I am new in the writing, I have read the wrong kind of clop fics to get ideas from ( cough cough one with a 20 foot dick cough cough
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Thank you for the comments! The length of the dick problem has been fixed and is a definite note in my book, I don't now when the next chapter will be up but it will involve: story, I don't think I can write all clop so if you want to skip the story that's gonna be in chapter 2.
I feel hecka bad for dashy now
4579052 *ridiculousness. In any case your story is entertaining. Dreams are ridiculous and this one is no different. I am happy i stumbled upon this... favorite+like.
4579847 Thank you so much! Comments like these inspire me to continue!
Ok, not sure if it means fem-cum or if Luna was having sex with her in the real world as well. Author, mind explaining which it is?
4586238 Ah I was waiting for someone to ask about that. I'm not continuing the story so let me just say: It was supposed to be that Luna's dream magic slowly became more and more real, starting with her own cum in Dash's marehood still. Hope that answers your question.
4586674 shame, wish the story could continue to be honest, see how it goes and in what direction. Heck if you need help with ideas and that is the issue I can offer help.
4589940 Eh between needing an editor and just not having the time to write such smut. I don't plan on continuing but I might continue later. I know I could a lot of fans by writing regular smut too which I understand. The summer will always be iffy for me. I have family fun and work to do like cleaning - moving stuff out of my room
- and then painting my room will leave me with NO private space to write clop without my family asking about it so that's something to think about but I hope I can still please my fans! 
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No, seriously, where the hell is that story? I want to find it just so I can see how the hell that happened. I require links! Bring me your links and maidens!
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Well I know of a similar one, its called Blueblood's Evil Need, where Blueblood uses chaos magic to reach similar sizes, at least if I remember correctly.
There's definitely potential here tn this story, but it goes by way too fast. I didn't even realize rainbow was pregnant until I read that foals started suckling on her swollen teats.
If you decide to do more, you need to spend a bit more time on details and feelings such as describing how Rainbow's belly swelled. The best thing you can do before posting a stoty is to read it out loud to yourself and make sure it makes sense. Also, if you need privacy to write stuff like this, if you have a smartphone, just get a simple text editor that makes it easy to transfer to a computer or something. I hope to see more from you at some point, because cumflation is one of the rarer fetishes on this site.
Oh, if you need an editor, I should be able to do some light editing on the side. Pm me if you're interested.
4644683 Ahh I dont remember I think it was in a group called My little Fetish
4645226 Thanks for the comment it will help in future writing!
4645545 Hm... alright then.
Now, I'll still be needing those maidens....
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Might have been Horizon's Special Talent or A Drunken Vow, both by Megapone.
definitely not what i was expecting.......
please make more
Hue.
To be honest I liked the idea of the whole 12 foot cock thing. It's sorta hot when you think about it, but that's just my opinion! ^u^;
it was going so good...then I saw the heavy rape part...
I'm sorry, but I just don't like rape as a fetish. I don't care if it's your fetish (your choice, not mind) but to me, it's more of a plot device then anything else. Besides that, however, it seemed to be pretty good, if a little rushed, and I wish the best for you as you continue writing.
Interesting, but in need of an editor to catch all the smaller mistakes.
Otherwise, I'm interested in seeing where you go with it.
this was a great story I want to see what happens next
Update?
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4934559 And I hope you enjoy the next!
4931126 Here you go!
OMC I was just thinking about how this hadn't been updated in ages, and what do I find?! Awesome Livi
5070551 Oh you flatter me! Motivation like this is what makes the next chapter come faster!
this is getting really good in a dark and creepy way. I just hop Luna is pulling an elaborate prank or this won't end well for the mane six or all of Equestria
Damn, Nightmare Moon all over again methinks
Oh..... so its going THIS way isn't it....
5071982 You'll just have to keep checking on the story!
5072414 Just keep reading and you'll see!
5072825 If it is I say, BLAST HER TO TEH MOON!!!!
Yay! More updates! If this is Luna's sense of humour then I don't think she'll be making any new friends any time soon
Moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar moar MOAR!
5073141 Relax I'm writing as we speak!
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.............And like that, im out.
5074022 And like that, I am soooo IN!
5074022 I understand why you might not like where the direction it is heading in but I do wish you could of stayed to at least look at my other fics in the future but it's your choice!