It's sad; this is the first piece of clop I've read in which they were married. Even Shining/Cadance clop tends to be 'after the invasion but before the wedding' smut, or else stuff from before Crissy got in the way. This is a refreshing change from normal clop, as this time the love stands out more than the lust. Excellent job.

PS: first comment. Yay!

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Glad you liked it. I'm surprised that someone else actually liked the fact that I pushed their relationship, but I guess I'm glad to know you did.

This fic is so sweet.this is how i imagine it'll be after my boyfriend and i get married.

Finally had some spare time to read some stuff.

Really sweet fic, you captured their love for each other very well indeed. And as usual very well written, I also agree with Cano in that it's a refreshing break from the normal clop.

Cup wrapped her arms around his neck

You might want to fix that.

I think this is one of the few clopfics that adds depth to the characters. This is actually really well written, it goes into more detail than clopfics typically would.

That was a wonderful story, but there's a very minor thing you may want to edit.

It wasn't a snails pace, but he made sure to draw it out over at least a few seconds.

That should be "snail's".