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so fucking sad right now. you even taunted us with the prospect of her becoming immortal in the previous chapter. It definatly serves as a powerful ending but it really doesn't make me happy, and I kind of wish I'd let it lie at the last chapter. I came for the clop, stayed for the story.
Well played you son of a bitch, I look forward to your next big piece.
Damn it loyal, you made me cry! Nobody makes me cry.
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Commence read.
Quite an emotional journey there.
Fleur definitely did some thinking on that gift.
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You have no idea how much seeing that jpg means to me. Thank you so much. :)
That Ending!
Keep reading, try not to cry, keep reading, try no to cry, finish, cry a lot.
Very well written Loyal, as are many of your stories.
Can't wait for your next excellent story to start.
I have to ask, is the memory pendant based off the memory ring from viwrastupr's Ascent. Book 1: Twilight? They seem awfully similar.
Fine, fine work.
My feels, how could you do this to me
I'm legit crying right now. Oh heavens the tears won't stop.
Am I crying you're asking, no it's liquid pride and dang does my eyes sting, stupid liquid pride.
I've been crying for 15 minutes just sitting here with the page up doing nothing. amazing story, you are my favorite writer on this site and I will read anything you put out. but damn it, I haven't cried so hard in a long time. well done, job well done
I cried...
THE FEELS I'M CHOKING IN MY FEELS T_T *insert sad violin here* https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIuotFZnBtk
I lost it at "Can you do that again?". Then I cried. A lot. That was yesterday. Today I'm crying again.
5407674 Not that we want you to cry for a third day in a row, but you might want to take a second look at the last few paragraphs of the epilogue. ;)
I have read this story about border lining 20 times now and this is the first time I did cry my eyes out. Believe me when I say I am still crying but it isn't as bad.
i feel like a idiot I meant didn't
Okay, the ending was pretty straightforward, which is understandable but kinda boring. I've read a lot of similar endings, so I'm a bit tougher to crack on that aspect. My fault. Your Celestia was pretty good considering her reasoning. It's entirely possible that she'd let her emotions blind her, especially when you bring her timebom of a sister in the mix, though at times it felt like she was just being adamant for the story's sake. The dialogue shone in some parts, but other times it fell flat due to the steady stream of exposition dumps. I give you kudos for trying to keep them far apart after the introductory chapters, but whenever i saw one rear its little head I groaned. They were far too common for my tastes; as with all the tears. So many tears xP
But despite my problems with it I've still gotta give this story a solid 8/10. It was so entertaining that I simply skipped the clop to go on with the plot. Once again, an impressive feat. Thanks for sharing your work with us. It was quite a thrill ride!
Sad ending, but I liked it. But I think I legitimately have an eye lash in my eye. Probably happened from blinking away tears.
You actually made me cry you beautiful monster. Well done.
There was a lot more sex in this story than I expected. Silly of me to not expect constant sex in a story about BDSM, I realise, but I'm a foolish mare at times. There were some lovely moments of submission, though; best-in-class for capturing the thought process, for sure.
This epilogue though.
I sort of figured Twilight wouldn't make it in time once it was introduced in the previous chapter. And really, it's... not "okay", really; I never like seeing Boss unhappy. But it was a life well lived and that's something. It was sweet.
Until Fleur's final gift.
And don't misunderstand: it's a truly wonderful gift! But the activation of it. I realised what was coming when the letter gave the hint, but... Oh my stars that very final word broke my heart. I don't think I've wept this hard in a very long time. It's just...
Luna said the safeword, but her scene can never end.
I knew it was coming, I was prepared. Or at least, I thought I was prepared until that letter. And even reading it I knew what was coming, I knew the trigger but the moment Luna said it, something broke.
Magnificent story, and damn you for making me weep like this.
This epilogue is fantastic. A perfect ending to a magnificent story, thank you for posting it.
That was... right. I mean you got our hopes up but I knew this moment was coming. and it was very very fitting. And fleurs final gift. My god. Absolutely brilliant.